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for Changes: past and present

by vbollman

schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That did answer some of my questions. Though I was wondering if Sess and Kagu was going to allow Inu any retailiation on Kag's behalf. Hopefully she won't get too upset with Inu because of what he's done.
person frani1375
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can really say about these latest chapters is....................EXCELLENT!! I am really loving your story. Keep up the good work.
person mikochick
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that is great plaese update soon i like this story its diffrent
person Ladykaa28
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did she hurt him bad??? And how bad was the past few days that she couldn't remember basically family? Details...I need more details.
person Ladykaa28
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so now that the family is there, how much longer before we start to see the training adn what's happening in the past to the rest of the Inugami? And how Sess's formal self will respond to them when they return to the past? I hope you don't take offense to any of my questions. It's just that you are really me think about this fic and picturing it in my mind as to hoe it is being played out. Like I said before I like it.
person Mystic Hanyou
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I like the plot. Although, won't Sesshoumaru training Kagome in the present disturb the past. Or is that he knows he trains her because of the style of fighting that she suddenly knows. Uh, guess I just answered my own question. But maybe put that in sometime for others. Update soon, later.
person Ladykaa28
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can you give us any more details about they are all here in the future with Kag and Inu? You haven't told us much about Sess's family and what about Kouga and Ayame? Can you say if any one else from the future will show up? Like Shippou?
person bettychan
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
person frani1375
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice. the last two chapters were really good.
person frani1375
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No prob. I know good work when I read it. update soon. I've never read a story with this take before. It's really good. Keep it up.