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for Demon School

by EndlessSorrow

person Sesshomaru\'s_gurl
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! This is an awesome story! You know, you really should not set such a high rate for reviews. Alot of people may like this story, but they may not have the time or patience to review. Me, I like to read the stories, and then at the very end of them I tell how I feel about it. So far, I really like this story. And if people have a problem with that, SCREW THEM! Write anyway to just tick them off! Hee Hee.. :P That is what I would do. Besides, if you really like this story, and really like writing it, don't wait for people to talk, you'll find that the longer you wait the more you will (maybe) lose interest in writing. That is sad. I really want to see this story to the end! :) I really like it! Well, so long!
Artemis
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hum... I actually like this one a tad more than the other story, because it's more relatable... Yes... But you need to update soon. Very soon. Maybe it'll inspire me to write something as well [Hint hint]
person hermonine
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Keep up the good work and update soon!
person Tasha
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the fact that they were brought together that way. usually, it starts out with Kagome going to SEsshomaru because of Inuyasha, but I really like how they kind of both have a thing for each other now. Keep up the awesome work ^.^
person Addicted
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
luv the new chapter! i'm a little concerned about the camera clicks at the end, but that just adds up to the excitement, right? ;) update soon!
person Subaru
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it please update soon!
person labelle
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot things are getting a little bit steamy i think.
person Subaru
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, please update soon!
person DarkMystic
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good, I love the plot and the idea of the demon school. There is just one thing that bugs me about this story, and that is the constant use of exclamation when the characters are talking. "They talk like this! And they act so uppety! Ahhhh!!!!!!!!" I hate that....It makes me want to kill Kagome when she talks like that.... >.< *Breaths in a deep breath, and then exhales sending a bit of tension with it.* Ok im fine...Anyways, you keep up the good work, and try to lighten up on the exclamations. Like the part where you put five exclamations by a sentence Like this!!!!! >.> Update soon.
person Endless Sorrow
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^;;; I'm sorry about that XD Recently, I've been taking care of my friend's daughter and she watches Cardcaptor Sakura everyday, so the constant happiness/giddiness of Sakura has really gotten to me >.< Anyhow, I will try my best to decrease my usage of exclaimations marks, and hope that you continue to read!