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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter, I wonder if Kurama or Hiei will end up being the one to track her down or will she go somewhere else totally? Can't wait to read more. Update soon please.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. i wonder how her identity just vanished like that. i can't wait to see how kurama and kagome react to each other. please update soon
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey loved the new chapter, so is Kagome going to be okay or will she wake up weak but become stronger with stronger power's? PLZ update.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry i meant love the New Story. lol
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. You do have a rather glaring goof in here though, you have dung as in crap instead of dug in the sentences where Inuyasha's digging his claws into things. I hope this helps.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...that's some angsty stuff....I love it. i wonder what happened to inuyasha. well update soon please.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this & can hardly wait to see where you're going with this. I do have 1 slight correction, surprised has r's on either side of the p not just after, you have it as suprised. Hope this helps.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done so far! This has definitely caught my interest!
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome or Hiei Kagome, and Sess please?
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For once I feel bad for Inuyasha. I wonder if somewhere within his mind he was aware of what he was doing? If so that must have torn him apart seeing what was happening. Kagome is going to be so screwed up over this, it's going to take her a long time to recover. Awesome chapter, I'm especially excited to see where you take it. Update soon please.