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for A Life Unlived

by kimisan

person badkitty
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to finish this story. It is such a good plot, I'm dying to find out what happend
person the_one_who_says_moo
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! that was great! please update soon!
person kougalover123
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice twist...that is interesting how she existed twice and how the city changed so much. please update soon.
person Bree
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is really good. I love stories about time paradoxes and you're doing a good job with this one. I can't wait for your updates.
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow so kagome's family died... and is her family shrine Genkai's now?
person Vanessa
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the new chapters, so will they find Kagome right away or will Genkai have to inform them of her? Plz update
person Ryukotsusei
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm sure that was a shock to the system. On all of their parts lol I can only imagine Hiei's reaction when they attempt to explain to him what is going on. He's likely to think they are all crazy. Good chapter, update soon please.
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person faerygirl44
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No!!!! You can't leave it like that! Very nice so far. I wonder what Kagome will do when she realizes what happens? And what about Naraku! Can't wait to read more!
person Kage Otome
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far, not so much the rape or the controlling thing, but it's a good start.