rate_review Reviews

so, i really have never found myself like this; i'm sitting...holding my breath. honest to god, caught in the throat and all! damn. now, you really really realllllly can't leave off there. good writting, maybe a little bit of a background on the characters to help out, like the mia girl (what's teh deal with her staring at kags like thanksgiving dinner?) interesting story, really well done. can't wait for the next chapter.

great first chapter so far. i'm not sure where u're headed with this story, but i'd like to continue reading to see how this whole thing unravels! u've caught my attention, and i can't wait for ur next chapters! til then, take care
lith*

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Really like your story line and how you told the story as Kagome turned to face Inuyasha. I will be looking forward to your updates.