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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, man. The only disappointing thing about it was that this chapter was too short. Please update soon. I just wish there was more to read. Are the present incarnations of Miroku and Sango ever going to remember their past?
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Inuyasha and Kagome's goodbye and separation was one of the best written and touching I have ever read. I'm just a reader Valkyrie, and I really appreciate the authors who put their work up for all of us to enjoy. I like this story and watching someone flaming it at every chapter is annoying me. I believe in questions, constructive criticism and praise but find flaming counterproductive. Keep up the good work. I'll keep reading.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha! aww my pleasure, but no need to thank me, your story is thanks enough! ^_^ this chapter was your best one yet. i liked how u brought closure to the whole incident on how Inuyasha and Kagome parted. it was really sad!!! -_- but still, i'm glad u wrote the chapter and i can't wait to see what else u have in store!!! til your next chappy, take care!!
lith*
lith*
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I like how you portrayed Inuyasha and Miroku's reincarnated friendship and Kagome's reaction to seeing Miroku again. Hope Kagome finds a way to explain the gum to Inuyasha. Keep up the good work. (I was going to comment to Anon again since I read chapter 4 as soon as you put it up and know it wasn't edited, however, I've come to the conclusion that you have picked up an ignorant stalker and it's best to just ignore them). Also, thank you for updating so quickly.
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. So far this story is awesome. I would love to see Yutaka's reaction to meeting Kagome. Could you write a lil about that? I also can't wait to see how the first meeting between Sango and Kagome this lifetime goes. Please write more soon. I love this fic. It has the right amount of angst and drama. Cool story!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey again!!! wonderful chapter, as usual of course! aww.. so kagome wasn't being insensitive to inuyasha, she jsut already knew that he would be stupid enough to choke on it. how cute!! ^_^ *hugs plushies* anyway.. loving the story!! it's going really well, and i can't wait to see how everything goes between 'kikyou', 'inuyasha' and kagome! i see u changed the names of the characters as well, it actually fits the story so no worries! anyway, keep writing! til ur next chappy, t.c.!
lith*
lith*
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see you edited chapter 4 to say that Kagome is not the reincarnation of Kikyou. Had to fix the plot hole...
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story update soon!!!!!!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Anon, the reincarnation issue was explained in Cpt. 4. Try reading a story before you decide to review it.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Since Kagome is Kikyo's reincarnation, how do you explain Kikyo in your story? How can the soul be reincarnated in two people at the same time?
That's a big plot hole.
That's a big plot hole.