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for Sedirea

by Valkyrie

person leewrites
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like reading your story. The storyline is a bit different and I can feel Kagome's heartache and Inuyasha's confusion. I reread the chapter of him leaving with the jewel and I cried. It is so hard to lose someone in death but to lose your love intentionally is heartshattering. I just hope your story has a happy ending, because I am a big sap. By the way how long was it when Kagome came back to the modern era and enter college? I am just curious to know how long she was with Inuyasha in the past and how before she met up with him in the present. Keep on writing it is great.
person nim
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really enjoyed this chapter. A lot more angst than I thought but oh I just love the drama it's developing into. Now I have question. If Inuyasha remembers his past life, then why doesn't he remember Kagome in them besides the fact that she doesn't look like her younger self. Why is he dating Kikyo? Could he have mistaken Kikyo as Kagome in his dreams or something? Is that why he's with Kikyo instead?
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
agh!!! oh no, not houjo...please gods not houjo! lol. he's...meh. he's like inu's foil...everything that inu is, he can't be (and that's missing a lot of man). X__x oh dear, what is Kagome to do? i can't wait to read more!!!
person InuyoukiSkye
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oi! yet another cool chappie !!!! Drama drama gotta love it. yeah my name is Skye but hey gotta show my Inu side lol so thats where the name comes from . Im a video editor heres my site got some cool inuyasha music vids on it http://inuyoukiskye.zippyvideos.com/ please review em. Anyway can't wait till ur next chapter!!! See ya later
person chanda
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update, I think that will be funny for Miroku to remember his lechourous (sp) ways...

Well until nextime,
Chanda
person ktakn
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter!!!!!!

i've been reading this for a while and its awesome ^^

keep going!
update soon =)
person Mizzy
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sad. No matter what lifetime, Inuyasha and Kagome just can't seem to get together without a lot of heartache and misunderstandings. I can see why she'd be hurt that Inuyasha didn't remember her when he remembered everybody else but I hate seeing Kagome run to Hojo. Will look for your update to see how this progresses.
person lithium88
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha, aww your replies to my reviews are very sweet! ^_^ but no worries, i review because ur story deserves it! anyway... i can't believe it!! damn hojo... still hanging around. oh well, so kagome's gonna move out of the apartment?! boy.. is inuyasha gonna be pissed, i can't wait to read and see wat happens. It's coming along great, and i'm sure it'll only get better! i'm very eager to find out wat happens, so until ur next chappy! take care. ^_^
lith*
And!!! oh snap! haha that's how i thought up my name. Lithium was always one of my favorite Nirvana songs, so when the 'review' asked for a name, lithium was quickly put into action!
person inuyoukiskye
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oi! nice fic . I think you have a great plot going and ur writting is good so please update soon!
person srg1
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story!!!!!!! One of the best I've seen. I can't wait to read more!!!!!