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by serialcabbit78

schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I'll despense with the compliments first before I tell you my beef with the story. I love the InuSess pairing for some odd, perverted reason. There's something hot about those two together, and I love the idea you've presented in your story.

My biggest issue with the story is that Sess is too emotional. He's a very cold demon. He doesn't believe in emotions because they scare him and he thinks that they make him weak. (Hence why he refused to love Serra and Kagura.) The only person who has ever even mildly seen him emotional is Rin.

Good job, though! :) Good luck on future writing!
person Isis
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a great new chapter please keep'em comin!
person Darius Miller
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't really care much for yaoi, but this was actually pretty good. It had a really nice plot to it and one event seems to lead to another. **Spoiler censored out by the commentor, read the story for yourself to find out** I can't wait to see the next what happens next.
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hee hee two lines ohh I gotta have another chapter
person ^^
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Keep 'em coming ^.~ (oh and for inufan, RN is a registered nurse)
person Center Fold
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh!
person uzamaki liliana
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG UPDATE SOON
LOL I WONDER WHO IS THE PREGNENT ONE
person PrincessSesshyMaru
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grrzzz Cliffy...awesome as always...update soon i beg you....
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please no inuyasha/sess/kagome pairing!!
person Gravity
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz dont tell me kagome's gonna b in the pairing...