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for Never Say "I love you, Kagome"

by jeffshelton

schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this story, maybe after they destroy him, then yasha can say it... it'll be alright then.

touching.

thank you,
ginny
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I really was thrilled by the breadth of emotion. I haven't been reading much lately, so I can understand how real life cruelly rips you away from the keyboard.
person ldymoonluvsinuyasha (not logged in)
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was a good one shot. I wish it was a little longer, but, I got the message. That hurts, as much as she wants to hear Inuyasha say it, he can't because of Naraku's trick. I really liked it.
person Anon
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good.
person emmet849
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful beginning. I think you may have meant it to be a one-shot, but I hope you consider continuing it.
person Angelique
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the premise of this one-shot, I too hope that you continue ^_^
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Bree
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very nice. Like the others, I hope there is more to this but even as a one-shot it is good. Looking forward to reading more of your writings.
person kaye
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! very impressive!!! I do wish you would add more!!! that was a very excellent idea!!! and well written!!!