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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A good story altough Kagome is a bit too crude in my opinion.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh Im so glad to see Shippo here, at least now she has a non jerk to hang around with. Sano doesn't count, he'll probably be going off on his own again soon I imagine. Aoshi is being a dick, he needs to figure out what the hell he wants and go for it and quit being so damned cold to her. Good chapter, update soon please
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...that certainly puts a twist on things...Shippo? I wonder what'll happen next. Will he recognize her? And about the Kagome/Aoshi thing, perhaps you could make mr "Tightass" jealous, using one roosterhead....*grins* the possibilities are endless. Keep up the good work!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As soon as you mentioned auburn hair, I knew.
And then I peed myself.
SHIPPO??!?!?!?!?!? And he's ANGRY????? WTF!!!?!?!? Oh man, oh crap, as if I wasn't obsessed enough with this story, you throw in a twist like this one. He's all in black?? WTF is going on?? ACK! Okay, besides being obviously and thoroughly shocked that Shippo may or may not be somewhat evil/pissed/delusional/insane, I love how this fic is progressing. Aoshi leaving without a word after she fired him was perfectly in pitch for his character, and it was a brilliant transition for her interaction with Sano. You are too, too cruel to the poor man!!! ;_; He's a sexy beast himself, but true, Kags is stuck on Aoshi whether she likes it or not. I still enjoyed her banter with Sano (reminds me of how she and Inuyasha could've gotten along had there not been so much drama between them). Another thing that piqued my interest was Aoshi's handling of the random bandit that attempted to rape Kagome. He moved just like Sesshoumaru, yet another reason to compare the two. I'm overly eager to learn more about his demon heritage; he's got to have some with the way he attacks and his superior attitude. I wonder, after this Shippo incident is addressed (how in the WORLD is that going to pan out??), how Aoshi is going to deal with Kagome? Or should I say, how she's going to deal with him? Man, I adore this fic. Great update, as always!
And then I peed myself.
SHIPPO??!?!?!?!?!? And he's ANGRY????? WTF!!!?!?!? Oh man, oh crap, as if I wasn't obsessed enough with this story, you throw in a twist like this one. He's all in black?? WTF is going on?? ACK! Okay, besides being obviously and thoroughly shocked that Shippo may or may not be somewhat evil/pissed/delusional/insane, I love how this fic is progressing. Aoshi leaving without a word after she fired him was perfectly in pitch for his character, and it was a brilliant transition for her interaction with Sano. You are too, too cruel to the poor man!!! ;_; He's a sexy beast himself, but true, Kags is stuck on Aoshi whether she likes it or not. I still enjoyed her banter with Sano (reminds me of how she and Inuyasha could've gotten along had there not been so much drama between them). Another thing that piqued my interest was Aoshi's handling of the random bandit that attempted to rape Kagome. He moved just like Sesshoumaru, yet another reason to compare the two. I'm overly eager to learn more about his demon heritage; he's got to have some with the way he attacks and his superior attitude. I wonder, after this Shippo incident is addressed (how in the WORLD is that going to pan out??), how Aoshi is going to deal with Kagome? Or should I say, how she's going to deal with him? Man, I adore this fic. Great update, as always!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love is like a force of nature, unpredictable and unstoppable. Sometime's it's beautiful and sometimes it's painful. But it happens to the best and the worst of us, even if we don't want it. Doesn't it? Keep up the good work! I love it!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFL.
I luv Kagome and her smart-ass comments.
Skullfuck.
That's priceless.
Keep it up, cuz as you can see, I am easily amused!
Good job, seriously.
I luv Kagome and her smart-ass comments.
Skullfuck.
That's priceless.
Keep it up, cuz as you can see, I am easily amused!
Good job, seriously.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You update! You make me so happy. Wow! Shippou show up, is Sesshoumaru going to show up to? What about Kouga?
Hope you update soon.
Hope you update soon.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great pairing! really funny language! waiting eagerly to read more! hurry & update!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why would shippo be attacking the village? please update again soon.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!