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How come Aoshi didn't notice Kagome when he saw her in town the previous day? She hasn't changed at all. I know it's been a while and it only a glimpse, but wouldn't he remembr her since Kagome's so 'beautiful'? Wait a minute... What ever happened to that woman that Makamachi had the affair with? It's obvious she didn't get to Misao, so where is she?

A few more questions: Is the priest related to Miroku in any way? And who wrote the scriptures about her, Midoriko and Kikyo? I hope you get to all this stuff and not just jump into the romance. *crosses fingers*

Lots of questions. Sorry if I asked too many. I'll keep reading now. Ja mata!!

--Oh, one more thing, you spelled Fujita Goro's name wrong. It's Saito Hajime, not Saitoh.

~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl

Ch. 3 - Wait... I thought you said Aoshi 'killed' Kagome with his kodachi? Aren't kodachi throwing stars, not a sword?

Well, other than that, great chapter. This story is going along pretty well. I like it. ^_^ NOt much to say, but I'll continue reading now. Please update soon.

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl

It's really weird that Kagome keeps bumping into these people, especially in the middle of the forest. She must have some kind of censor on her. *laughs* But poor Sano. Boy did he get an eyefull. Can't imagine being from their time and seeing something like that. Oh, speaking of which, what are 'highbeams'? Are they like goosebumps? Just wondering.

You're making Kagome really nonchalant about things like being undressed in front of men and being attacked, but she blushes and stumbles when someone kisses her. I know Kagome has a backbone, but she has this 'fuck you' attitude now. It's a little strange.

Umm, how long have they been traveling? You said Aoshi's been back for two weeks? I wouldn't think that you'd make him go back to the village. Maybe stay away/head back for a few days then change his mind but... Didn't you say that Aoshi was trying to make up for all the bad deeds he'd committed? So why would he listen to and leave a woman (no matter how she could defend herslef), who was presumably new to the area, in the forest alone? That seems a little backwards.

WAI! Shippou's here! YAY! Maybe they can travel together? Then again, he's been killing/stealing from people. Is he bad now? I hope not. Poor thing, left alone all those years... *sigh*

They had churches in Japan back then? I thought they only had temples - especially since you're calling them houshi. What religion are they?

Oh, and Umm... the curse is jackass (as in donkey - there's no such thing as a 'jerkass').

~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl

This is the first crossover of Inuyasha and Kenshin I've ever read and actually liked. I can't wait until the next chapter. Hope you update soon!

Oh!!! I hope Kouga going to show up soon. I can't wait, what going to happen if he show up and call Kagome "his woman". Oh!! The Jealousy wear its ugly head again. Now, that chapter I definitly not going to miss. And, let's not foget our beloved Taiyoukai, Sesshoumaru. I hope his going to show too. This story was so awesome. Can't wait to read your next chapter.

Hope you update soon.

poor shippo, being all by himself for so long. please update again soon.

Jealousy rears it's ugly head! Or not so ugly in Aoshi's case...Aoshi is hot! My, my what a problem Kagome has on her hands, stay with Shippo and the two men in their company or return home...Choices, choices.

*gasp* its shippo! update i wanna know what happens!!

Ooooohhh, VERY evil cliffy. Please update soon since I really like this & can hardly wait for more, especially after that ending.

Shippo? Eak, holy crap. How is Kagome going to get out of this one?