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OMG I'm so in love with this story I check it everytime I'm on this site. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. Will they have any problems getting back to Kyoto? What will Aoshi do when he finds out Kagome is going back to tokyo with Sano? Will more happen between Aoshi and Kagome? Oh PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I just can't wait to find out what happens next!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

Wow, man! Great story! I hope you update when you have the time. See ya!

UPDATE

Woo!
Go Kagome.
Excellent chapter, as usual.
My favourite phrase is still skullfuck, though!

pretty good crossover fic. a few grammar errors, but overall, a very good
storyline with some pretty good ideas. Keep it up!

when are you gonna update?????

Hi ^^ I LOVE THIS STORY ^^ I`m a really big Fan of Inuyasha and Kenshin and read all Mangas from them ^^ ( I Love Aoshi ^^ he is so sexy >.< .... drool )
so please update SOON !!!!! ^^

I love this story so far. It isn't often that you see RK/IY crossovers which is a shame since they seem so close in era and feel. I like how you keep each person in character and manage to add your own touch to their personalities. Kagome and Aoshi's relationship is very well done; how you keep them wanting one another but also straying is a very well done touch. Also putting in Aoshi and Misao's association while keeping them friendly is admirable (since I seem to find a lot of people using her as a 'bitch'/'slut'/etc ^^;; ). I was surprised to see Shippo in there, it was interesting to see how you explained why the demons weren't there and how he had survived and what he had to do to survive. I cannot wait to see the next chapter *nodnod*

For the last reviewer I wanted to point out a few things. First, in the anime and on the series that's what Aoshi's weapons are called. So thats what was used here. As far as killing her I don't think he'd remember. There's a lot of goodlooking people out there. What he considers beautiful now he might not have 12 or 13 years ago. Then the fact that he's killed too many people to count, after all that time it would be easy for him not to remember someone he saw for only a few minutes. She was of no importance to him at the time. I flip people off everyday from road rage, a bad habit of mine but I'm not going to remember who I gave the bird to last week much less over a decade ago. Not to mention even if he made a connection he wouldn't think Kagome was the same person. In his way of thinking she should have aged over a decade NOT look the same.

I'll also point out that Saito is spelled two ways depending on which way you go with. I've seen it spelled Saito and Saitoh in the jap version. I've seen it both ways, so does it really matter?

Now to Kagome's reaction. Lets point out the fact that Kagome is from an era where females where bikini's to the beach. Hello a bra isn't that much difference, covers the same amount of flesh. So NO, that wouldn't really bother her. As far as it not bothering her killing, she did travel with Inuyasha. Should we try to count how much shit they killed. If she got disturbed by it after all that, how realistic would that be???? As far as the kissing, that isn't something she's use to, so yeah it would unsettle her somewhat.

HELLO, highbeams is a slang term for when a woman's nipples get hard. How old are you? As far as jerkass, that was correct. It's slang for when a person combines two insults together. Let me give you a few examples, BitchBoy, Shitfucker, Assnutt, Shitterd, etc....

As far as Aoshi character is concerned it is in character. He is trying to make up for his past but he isn't Kenshin. Where he wants to save everyone that he meets. He found some peace when Kenshin defeated him but he didn't change that much. He still sees Kagome as a job at that point, not the woman he loves and has sworn to protect.

Churchs ,temples whats the difference. Okay there is some but I'll just point this out there was Houshi/Monks, people that were buhdists. Also in the anime they had other religions thrown in there, take a freaking pick.

Now for my personal opinion, what kind of person has to nitpick about everything in a fic? I see some other reviews where you left, I believe you complained about markings and such. If you want complete non fictional bullshit you are on the wrong site. Its fanfic try reading it for enjoyment, not so you can tear it apart and point things out that you might not agree with. Try having a valid complaint before opening your mouth.

Oh heres a good word that fits you. How about Assclown!