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I love thsi fic. Anon, Sesshomaru would never rape anyone, or hurt/degrade Rin in such a manner. (A part we never see of him? WTF?
Where did it show him going around acting like a rapist, plus I think Jaken would take Rin away if he did)

Again I think this is an awesome fic. To me it wasn't a dark fic, more of a semi-light fic. No one should bother you with, such things as why do you hate Sesshomaru/etc. This is what fanfics are about. (yours is very nicely done)

Please make a sec. Chapter. Also nice one about the Jakin thing. (When Rin asked if Sesshomaru should od it to him. Ha ha ha ha )

It's a shame that people are giving you a hard time about this. it's very well done and honestly, it doesn't seem OOC. It just seems more like a part of him that we never see.
Screw the ones that can't handle this and they're looking for a Rin as Mary Lou story.
Keep up the great work!

I like the story thus far, and its well written. Very dark, lots of potential. I hope to read more.

Okay, responding to ^_^...

To answer the question, NO, I DO NOT THINK SESSHOMARU WOULD EVER RAPE ANYONE, child, adult, anyone. Every other part of your flames have been addressed elsewhere. Since I invited flames for this story, I didn't remove the one on this one, despite the advice of moderators to do so. However, next time you choose to review someone, I do hope that you offer something constructive and don't focus entirely on your sadistic desire to troll someone you've never met and who never would have done this to you or anyone else. The closest thing to a negative comment I've ever left for someone was that they should look into getting a beta reader and the only reason I even said it was because I thought their story was wonderful and wanted them to improve as a writer and betas help a lot of people do that.

~Xak

I read your fic, I read your reviews (including your response), and I read your author's note. I am a Sesshomaru+(Older)Rin couple supporter and that will always stick to me no matter how others feel about it. I have seen all the episodes and movies 1-3 of InuYasha and no where in them does Sesshomaru strike me as the raping or taking advantage of kid Rin sexually type. I haven't read the mangas yet, probably won't since I don't care for those, but a question I have for you is (if you read all the mangas) and I want an honest one: WHERE IN THE MANGA DOES IT HINT OR SPILL OUT THAT SESSHOMARU IS A RAPIST OR CHILD MOLESTER?

I'm not saying you said that, its just a question; please answer that. Seeing Sesshomaru's personality, I don't believe him to degrade himself to such things. Kid Rin and Sesshomaru in the beginning does have a father and daughter like relationship ^^ that is clear enough... she adores Sesshomaru and respects him. As she continues to follow Sesshomaru, she will grow up into a beautiful woman someday and when that happens Sesshomaru will more than likely not look at her as a daughter anymore and Rin's adoration will turn into love. Us supporters of this couple see Sesshomaru claiming Rin when she is a woman. Now whether what our laws say today of the age of being an adult, if the law back then said your a woman at age 13 then so be it. Its just like today, if the law was to say your an adult at age 11 then an 11 yr. old dating a 16 yr old wouldn't be looked upon as wrong. Although the thought is scary ^_^0. I understand and I totally agree, we all have different ways of looking at things. This is your story and you can do what you want, if others don't like it or find it disgusting then they shouldn't of read since you did warn them. I also agree that just because this is the rin and sesshomaru section doesn't mean you have to write about happy and lovey dovey things. You're a great writer, I don't like the idea of Sesshomaru doing that to kid Rin but that doesn't make you a bad writer. Just makes me wonder about what was REALLY going through your head when you wrote this then posted it up. I can see your the type that will use your review box to respond back to criticism/flamers and that is fine, ^^ I am saying my piece and after this I have nothing more to say because I don't engage in arguments or fights over the internet; its childish and lame in my eyes. I can waste my own time thank you. I will look to see if you answered my question, and that is it. I like how you dealt with Wow123's response and I also like how you sent out a message in your author's note at the end of the story to people who have been through sick stuff like that. You can write what you want because its YOUR story but I don't applaud you for portraying Sesshomaru like this. You have your way of seeing things and I have mine. Everyone IS entitled to THEIR opinion. Bye now, respond back in a LONG report if you wish.... I'll just be looking to see if you answered my question. You can look at this as offensive if you wish, doesn't matter to me. This is a review and I'm telling you what I think. Your a great writer, use your talents on what you decide.

wow. that was very good. I think maybe u should continue and bring out the characters more. because that was pretty deep. looooooved it!

Beautifully written! I think this is probably the closest thing Rin and Sess could have when it comes to a relationship, and you displayed it so well!

Rock on!

Ack, that was sad. Poor Rin, she does get tortured in so many fics!

I really like how you wrote Sesshoumaru in this - I love the Sesshoumaru character, but there are plenty of times that he acts like a heartless monster in the manga. And as for 'love' being the reason the abused do not report -this definitely makes sense. I am not sure how 'young' you intended Rin to be, but I know that many young teens have been seduced by older guys into doing things they are not ready for in the name of 'love'. Great job!

im too lazy to log in i just wanted to read your new story.

i have a very disturbing feeling that the more this sinks in the more powerful it will become to me. and yet again i have a haunting image from this one! X.x creepy as hell too!

anyway i agree, i dont ever see Sesshomaru and Rin together as a real "couple" i favor the father/daughter relationship and cant see it as anything but rape any other way.

*hugs* i think you did a good job writing from Rin's POV, and those thoughts of hers floored me because i know it's the truth in RL.

once again the ending is what killed me - you ALWAYS do that to me! *curses a blue streak* one day imma get through one and not have the last paragraph impact me the most!

Wow. That was scary. I've written quiet a bit about rape, but always from the perspective of the rapist or in the 3rd person. So this was something new to me.

I to, can only see the Sesshomaru/Rin pairing like this. But I think he conciders her to be a pet, rather then a daughter.