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I am not worthy DEEP BOW WOW INTENSE CRY your eyes out.A horrifingly lovely bit of angst I thank you again yours in admiration KarenAnnLacey!!!!!

That was well written and I see it must take a very brave person to write about that the way you did. I would just like to leave a word for everyone on the site though. It's just a story guys. I mean, I've been through something similar (but no I didn't feel love, only hatred) and I created a LOLI story. You know, lolicon? It EXISTS as much as people wish it didn't, but what I'm trying to say is, it's just FICTION. If pedos enjoy it or not, man don't let that stop you because then no one would be able to write about rape, because it would encourage rapists; no one would be able to write about drugs, because it would encourage using it; man NARUTO would be completely censored because it could encourage violence among kids!! Do you see what I'm trying to say? Just take a chill pill guys... it's fiction. Reality is so much different.
But anyway, I liked how you handled the subject, well done. Sorry if I ranted.

OMG, I started to cry when I read it. When I was 11 a stranger do terribal things to me. Lucky for me he was captur and got 3 years in jail. I wish he had got more years.

Okay I'd just Like to say that Back then it was normal for girls as young as 10 to be married to men 20 or so. In the times in Sess was a human it would be considered normal. So its not really rape.

I read your storyit sound like what somebady did to my.I m not going to say any names .

Very well written. It was dark and...creepy. Is Rin the normal age in this? Like 8 or so? Just curious. Anyway, it was extremely well done. :)

not disterving I was taken as a virgin at 8 with a 14 year old,
and now he's my husband,

ahh.. i can definitely see why you'd be getting flamed up your ass.. well, in my opinion, you did your best with the disclaimer and you should have no further responsibility beyond that. manipulation is evil.. young minds just aren't strong enough to stand against clever lies and so-called "love". it's just disgusting that most child abuse cases DO take place between family members.. the world is ugly. you didn't make it ugly.. it's just ugly on its own. so i stand with you against the flame-throwers. i guess most ppl have just been sheltered from this type of shit so they are in denial. either that, or they just took it personal that u tainted their beloved sesshy =P

goodness.. i got a chance to read all the reviews after i submitted mine and hell.. it was almost as entertaining as the story itself =P i can't believe the stuff ppl got anal on!!! i mean.. really.. it's FICTION.. has any of them cracked a dictionary to see the meaning?? the most ridiculous thing is that they kept telling u that u were a great writer but that u should write on better things.. WTF? content half-makes the writer.. we can all learn the rules to language and express proficiently, but it's the stuff that we choose to express that makes us unique.. u were gracious enough to reply.. i woulda thrown them bones o.O i'm gonna go check the rest of your stuff now.. i hope no more reviewers ask for a lemon-version of this though.. that's just disturbing on every level.
huggles.. u deserve a toast! i will buy u a drink =)

in some way i wish you would remove this. in another, maybe you should leave it. these things need to be addressed. could you write a fic about the kind of strength it takes to get over this? I would like that.