rate_review Reviews

My God I wanted to bawl by the end of the story. WOW! I Liked it and hope that one day you will write a fic that ends..well a little happier. But I do agree with you I hoped Sesshomaru matures a little and doesn't stay so jaded.

Heartbreaking! I wanted to cry with Rin. The ending is so beautiful. And even though he's abandoning her, you can't blame him.
It's different from the other fics with this pairing and I really loved it!
Gonna read your other fics, I will try to review all of them (I can't promise I'll do it immediatly since I already have a LOT of other reviews to read).
But really, it was great!

I absolutely loved this ficlet. I'm not fond of the Rin/Sesshy pairing, but someone suggested this one to me, and when I read it, I was wow'ed. Excellent characterization of Sesshoumaru, and I think it's a realistic idea on how he'd handle Rin in the future. Bravissima!

I love your fic, and would like to put it on my site. Don't worry, it will be under your author's name and any other details you need to add. The site is completely new and still lacks authors for the fanfiction and poetry section. Here is a link to my site, please email me. http://home.earthlink.net/~karenia76116/

wow... these r one of the damn few stories
where Sesshy-kun actually... STAYS IN CHARACTER!
big surprise huh? kudos on the characterisminity.... whatever... >.<
great job and we all expext even more great fics from u!

Beautiful and quite plausible. You've packed into one lovely one-shot what it lesser writers would take many chapters to get across.

I have to admit to giggling when Rin 'accidently' rubbed up against Sesshoumaru near the beginning. heh, the idea of him being sexually harrassed. The drowning scene was particularly intense and sad. Then end brought back memories of times I was SURE that someone felt the same way, WOULD feel the same way, if only I tried, stayed with them. But the answer is sometimes 'no'.

Had seen your name around so I started by reading your first couple of fics. In your review reponse (ha-only an author who really cares about getting her ideas accross would go to the trouble - was great), you mentioned you only write canon. Canon doesn't normally light a fire inside for me, but do love your writing. Have to take a look and see if you have any other alt. fics soon.

This fic was amazing, it did exactly what I believe you intended it to. It made me feel sad, but I also felt like it was complete. You are an awesome writer! I hope to read more of your writing.

This was so sad... hope u eventually make one happier :)

It's good, realistic and based onto the point, I like it ^_^

You weren't kidding when you said the story was sad, but it was still highly enjoyable. I thought the three stayed really close to character. Great story. ^^