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that story kicked ass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i mean this story kicks ass!!!!!!!!

I like it....it's different from your other stories......

omg...please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

me again ^_^ i hated the middle of this storie it broke my heart but i cant wait to hear the next chappie so bring it on!

HOLY CRAP IN A HAT! This is an amazing piece. I've always wondered what would happen to Kagome And Inuyasha if he stayed in his demon form for a long period of time. With the types of feelings he has bottled up for Kagome, I knew he'd explode. I lost count how many times i started to cry while reading this. This is powerful, this is emotional, this is violent (the rapes really brought out the emotions). For the love of God I must see see more. Please update!!!

great story! i love it, please update soon.

beautiful i love it and thanx 4 including me in ur stotie first time!^_^
love the storie thanx

Me again! :) hehe yayy im glad u used Koinu for a name hehe thats what I call my puppy now.. ive basically renamed her that.. and I also taught her Osuwarii!!! hehe and she always sits like a good puppy! lol.. anyways really good chappy.. but I really hope u get Kagome and her family to stay in the same time period.. maybe since her mom was such a bitch have her tragically killed in which case.. Kagome takes Souta and Koinu and moves to the feudal era.. ? That way they could all be together. ya kno Build a home.. Souta could eventually meet and gain an interest in Rin.. umm Miroku since hes all alone now.. could maybe not forget about Sango ever but have to move on .. and gets together with.. a female demon .. (that way if they mate u could ya kno say now their bonded for life and will live for a longgggg time) hehe and since Rin is under Sesshy's protection she gets a demon seal causing her and her mate (souta) to have a demons life expectancy. Idk hehe Ive got lots of ideas.. What happened to Shippo ? did he die? I really hope he didn't. I luvvv shippo.. U should have him show up in the next chappy or so.. and he can still be Kagome's adopted son.. and he can eventually mate Souten(the lil sister of the thunder brothers) she seemed to have gained a crush and the 2 of em hit it off quite well.. hehe :) ooo n who for Sesshy?? Maybe a female dog demon, or Kagura since shes freed from naraku? or.. A stubborn Human who can show Sesshy how to love but also push his buttons to keep him in line .. oo shes gotta be kind too! hehe :) anyways sorry for all the stupid ideas.. please keep up the excellent work and update soon!

I have a couple suggestions. 1) He could name the child Inutaisho in memory of his father. 2) He could name it Shippo to honor him and the fact that he died trying to protect Kagome. 3) He could name it Kaisho which combines Kagome's and his father's name and if I'm not mistaken the word ~kai~ means something along the lines of heavenly or celestial being and I'd (or rather you'd) have to look up what ~sho~ meant. I do know that shonen is boy and shojo is girl. That's all the names I can think of right now but if I think of anymore I'll write them in another review.
Arigato. :3

>'.'< Sakura Seijiro Son Takahashi >'.'<