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September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Terrible spelling, grammar, word use and sentence structure.... The story has potential, but not with it so lazily written....
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a bit dark and super rapey....but I liked it.....good work.
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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, look forward to tbe sequil.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG that was the best story ive ever read in my entire life please keep writing when I was reading it i cried.{sniff sniff}
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a wonderful story!! Bravo! Keep up the good work!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved the story i hated the part that sango died and kouga and shippo and i hope u make a sequell to this story it was probly one of the best stories iv read.i hate it when inu turns full demon its freakn scary but kagome is always by his side no matter wat so great story email me back if u want i don't care
love
kristen a.k.a kagome
love
kristen a.k.a kagome
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If it makes you feel any better I liked your story. I honestly wish it wasn't the end. In the beginging I was sad for Kagome because of how Inuyasha was treating her. But the ending was happier though, So I also felt happy^_^ I don't know about everyone else though, but I would like to see a sequel...
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. keep it up please! That's all I have to say.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I lied I'm going to say a few more things I really enjoyed this story. I know alot of people are sickened by rape scenes and tend to rush through them so that they might not feel so uncomftorable when writing them but I actually thought that you did a really good job of them. Cudos
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You had a strong begining. I wish you would have either stopped there or taken the time to complete the story in a way that didn't crap out so poorly. Sorry, but I'd have to advice people not to read it.