errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet
schedule
October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this story is great! u really put good detail of emotion and feelings. i like the story very much and hope u make more chapters and such. that would be awesome!!!
schedule
October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Get someone to clean up your grammar, punctuation, and word usage mistakes and this will be a good one-shot. There are missing verbs in a lot of compound sentences that make some sentences disjointed. They are probably just typos so just proof read your story better next time.
schedule
October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet ass dude. nice job!
schedule
October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So sweet, so cute..........Just beautiful!!!!! Good work!!!
schedule
October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uumm loved it, romantic, sexy and well written. Can we have more? Would love to see the morning after effects :)