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Aw!! Please?! I love stories full of love/ hate relationships and bloody murder! It seemed to be going just fine... Oh well, I won't pester you, but I will be checking back.

I'm speaking from the viewpoint of a fangirl and an English major..... yes, using less than common adjective can be annoying to the general public, especially if the words are hard to understand within their contexts. But some of your reviewers were too harsh. I mean, if Shakespeare can invent words, why can't you experiment a little too? If you want pallid to be a noun, then dammit, let it be a noun. After the English dictionary added bootylicious as a word, nothing is impossible anymore.

Just ignore them, bend to their will a little to appease some of them, but keep your style. It would be too boring if everyone wrote their stories the same way, ne?

>:D That's just kick ass. Or, as the |337 would say, j00 4r3 7o74| p\/\/n4g3. j00 |{1c|{ 455.

wow! the first chapter brought tears to my eyes! it's so sad and beautiful at the same time. i love it. please continue.

p.s. I'm sorry about your uncle. my heart goes out to you

Since you're re-working this, I thought that I'd review again. ^_^ You already know that I love this from my previous reviews.

is the idea gonna be the same? i hope so. i love it, bye

I have decided to completely wipe out what I have done and go back through it and start from a different angle. Some things will be the same, some will be different. But, due to the recent death of my uncle I'm not sure exactly when I'll be getting around to doing it >.<

Much better! ^_^ I loved the first chapter. I was glad you cut down on the adjectives a little bit. There are still a few things that I feel don't completely flow right, but, overall, I think you did an awesome job! *beams at you*

Keep improving! I'll see you next chapter!

your story is by FAR the best ive ever read! the vocabulary is outstanding, i mean who would think to put the scientific name of your jaw!! i understood perfectly the whole thing, but when i shared this with my coworker, she had to google some words, Wunderful!! thank you for writing this.

*lexi