rate_review Reviews

Could use a final paragraph, to end the story. But really good over all.

Not only was that unbelievably hot, it was also very well written. Great Job. My only complaint is that it could have been a little bit longer. It was slightly odd that they pretty much jumped into intercourse without any foreplay or teasing of Inuyasha, but it's your story and you did a great job with it anyway

moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremmromore

To quote Faye from Cowboy Bebop (because for some unknown reason I always picture her when I hear anyone else say it)...

you have...gOt To bE...KIDDING!!!!!!!!!!!!

Holy crap-sticks. While I must gloat that I have enough imagination to *cough* fill in the blanks, I can't BELIEVE you left us dangling from the vertiable cliffs of Mt. Friggin' EVEREST!!!!! Even with just the lime zest (because, yes, that's all it was, the mealy PEEL!!!) it was unbelievably hot. Shit-AKE mushrooms, that was deviously DELICIOUS!!!!! I really, really, *really* don't think Inuyasha has any excuse to hang on to his perpetual decision-angst anymore, do you? Obviously not, considering you wrote it! Hot damn...I mean it, hot friggin' damn...no lemon and that was just an erotic smorgasbord. And apparently...I'm slightly obsessed.

So yeah, it was good. Write more, I plead.

wow, inu finally is getting what he deserves, you must complete this one.