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for A New Dream, A New Destiny

by ladygizarme

person Diane
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this & can't wait for more. On this part here after the gym part you have Kurama instead of Shuuichi & if it's still from Nori's POV it would be Shuuichi since she's clueless about his real name etc., here's the bit I'm talking about from chapter 5; Nori immediately sent Katsuki to follow them, sure she wouldn’t be able to watch the two hold hands for much longer before she would explode. Nori ran into them again, however, when she went to retrieve her bag from her locker before heading down to change her shoes. Kagome was also getting her things from her locker and she and Kurama then went down to the ante room together. Neither of them even noticed Nori.
person kougalover123
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update again soon. i want more.
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, thanks for lettin' me know! wow, i can't believe no one noticed it before haha!!
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are so evil
please please update soon
its a really good story
person UKK
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fighting powerful youkai, retrieving stolen magical items, and saving the world as we do on a regular basis...MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA Hack! OMg I love that line! Hurry up and update!
person demonqueen
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that this is a great story. You've thrown in a nice mix of mystery,prophecy, jealousy,etc. into it. I will be waiting to see more chapters to learn how things are going. Please update as soon as you can.
person demonqueen
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great story so far. I love the way if flows together. Are you going to have Kagome come to trust Kurama enough to tell him about her adventures in the past. It would help the poor guy figure out why she doesn't want to get involved with a demon,etc. Is she going to mee the rest of Kurama's team mates? Is Sesshomaru still alive and living in the Makai realm? Is Kagome going to meet him? Course, it wouldn't be necessary for the story and would kind of re-open old wounds that are trying to heal. Anyway, good story and can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is one hell of a start to a story! I like how hard Kagome is trying to protect her heart from being hurt again. It is going to take some extra hard work on Kurama's part to get her to come around. Loving this. Hope you update soon!
person SilkenOrgasm
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marvolus...loving this story I am indeed!

Waits patiently for more*

Sel~
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice hot limes you've got I'm really enjoying this I love cross overs.