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for A New Dream, A New Destiny

by ladygizarme

person Diane
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is there any possibility of getting a 5 year anniversary chapter? You said at 1 point that this would be updated in a few months & that's been years ago. I'm kinda getting tired of rereading the same chapters over & over.
person Diane
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is this ever going to be updated? I've been waiting for chapter 6 for like 4 years now & a year or 2 ago an update was mentioned as coming as soon as a Gravitation fic which was going to end in 3 or 4 chapters was finished but the update has never been posted.
person chaoscat
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you blended the two worlds. not often a i moved to review, but this time, i find your work wonderful enough to want to do this. you have a gift, and i eagerly await the next chapter of this story. please, if it won't be too much trouble, let me know when it is updated? I have not been as amused or intrigued by a fanfic like this in a while.
Chaos
person Diane
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this & would love to see an update sometime soon since I've read the whole thing through at least 4 times by now & it hasn't been updated in so long.
person ptbear
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to read the reactions of everyone when they find out that Kagome fought in the past to save the world and if she will join Kurama and the team.
person Banzai
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Bad toddler! Bad, naughty toddler! LOL! I love this first chapter.
person Banzai
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Erm, I think that you overdid it with the OCs on this chapter. Not meaning to be rude but I just want to tell you that I didn't bother to read 99% of the stuff written regarding the OCs. They're not important to me. I would have preferred it if you spent those long paragraphs I had to scroll down on trying to solve why Kagome is running away from Kurama. I think Kagome is so out of character and too tight-lipped about it that it's bordering on unbelievable already. Sorry.

I think that what you should have done was to write more to help Kurama gain Kagome's trust and then move into Kagome joining the Reikai Tantei team. Somewhere in your story, you lost sight of what you had on your summary and pushed the main players into the background for the OCs. The summary about Reikai wanting Kagome as one of their own detectives was replaced by a highschool love story with OCs.

I still like it and will read if you upload a new chapter, but my excitement and awe-factor has greatly diminished.
person Diane
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would REALLY love to see a new chapter for either this or UA, since I don't follow any of the other series you've been writing for & really miss reading your stories.
person Tushuri
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wish you would update!
person Tushuri
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love this story! I hope you update soon!