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by Silent Pluto

person Kourui
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW AWSOME JOB I LOVEDTHE FIRST CHAPTER! WOOT WOOT! Keep up the good work, I hope the next chapter is just as awsome!!!


Kourui
person Kourui
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow awsome second chapter...Hmm Binx seems alot like Shippou and inuasha out together ^_^ LOL I wonder what they would say if they met him ^_^ LOL ANyway awsome job I loved this Chapter WOOT@


Kourui
person Kourui
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL Ilove How Miroku seems jelous of Binx, LOL Awsome job on this chapter a little to shore for my liking but still good ^_^


Kourui
person Redlightspin
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That would be such a typical scenario for that couple it fits their romance to a key
person Hideous Roots
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really loved how you did the lemon!! It was so touching, I almost started crying! It's so rare that I see an adult fiction with a well thought out sex scene--one that isn't rushed or written for the author's own gratification. GREAT JOB!! Please write more Miroku/Sango fics like this!
person windtunnel luver
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!! I loved the little kitsune Bianca. She sounds like a good mate for Shippo!!
person mirsanforever
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was good! u r right though, all's well that ends well. ( or so we thought...)loved it! can u make another story with miroku and sango in it again? this is a made-up summary i thought of.(i suck at it though) miroku and sango start spending more time 2 gether and for once during those good times, she doesn't slap him even though he cops a feel on her. but the prince that tried to porpose to sango, returns,tries to win her heart over ,and miroku gets a bad case of the green-eyed monster. u don;t have to write it if u don;t want to. i' ll respect what u want to do with you're writing.
person Peace
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It wuz great but i think it should av had a dif ending but thats just my opinion. You did a great job on that story in my opinion also.
person rmguccione
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing*
That was awesome! That last scene with Sango chasing Miroku around was hilarious.
person Josh
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey Pluto that was a good story I love the way you make it realistic. In the show she does that too and you put it in the story really brings the character to life with how she behaves. Miroku's behavior is right on point to. You should keep it up and e-mail me if you want later.