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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you had cut the entire 6 chapters out and left only the lemon, it would have been good. If I had wanted to read some crazy OC story I would have gone to fanfiction.net. Honestly I skimmed the first few chapters and basically knew the plot by just a few paragraphs.
Also, girls don't squirt cum. I know the little Manga-hentai stories sometimes portray a woman's orgasm as some wonderful gusing thing, like a fountain of white goo, but in reality; no. Just..no.
Also, girls don't squirt cum. I know the little Manga-hentai stories sometimes portray a woman's orgasm as some wonderful gusing thing, like a fountain of white goo, but in reality; no. Just..no.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh.. poor miroku...i feel bad...he said i love you and then when sango found out about his plan they go back to fighting........
i loved they ending though never saw it coming!!!
i loved they ending though never saw it coming!!!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, especially the ending, it was like an episode..a lemony one lol.
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked how u kept the characters in character throughout the entire story. and i absolutely love the ending! it was hilarious! thanks for the great story. this is the best miroku/sango i've read yet.
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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty good!, I love all the scenes with the other fox demons it was creative and well thought out. It was very good indeed. Keep up the good work.
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...Miroku is a bit OOC He would never actualy harm someone like that threaten them maybe but not harm, I'm just saying awsome job though keep it up!!!
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL sangos mad now, ^_^ Yeah awsom job, Oh my god poor Sango I wonder if Miroku new or if it was only the foxs...hmmm? Anyway awsome job I loved it!!!
Kourui
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was a funny chapter, LOL I loved the end were Miroku kept singing over and over I'm not dreamng ^_^ Awsome job!!!
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow great chapter the lemon was a litte dry lol but still good, awsome job ^_^ LOL Miroku was trying so hard to ^_~
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL I loved it, woot! The ending was awsome great job, keep up the good work awsomw job!!!
Kourui
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