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Very cute story, and very relatable. I would probably play the same games with Sess. that she seems poised to begin. It really made me laugh. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

That. Was. So. Hot. The description of Sesshoumaru's release was absolutely inspiring. I love the game, but damn, girl. It's going to be over before it starts. Whew! *fanning self*

Thanks for a great chappie

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

Wow. Very sweet and very hot. You're doing such an excellent job with characterizations; it's very difficult to get all the nuances of Sesshoumaru. And I have to say that Ayeka is one of my favorite OCs ever. I almost can't keep up with the updates, though I'm not complaining.

ohh! you pegged sess so well! he would think so arrogantly! haha! and what's with ayeka? what's she doing? she's gonna get her friends killed! sess' gonna be pissed! lol! the readers are pleased with your sacrifice... of chap 34... it tasted good... *cough* :D

loved how sessh turned woo and win into overwehlm and conquer lol, and I cant wait till ryu and kurama get there to stir things up again. please please update soon, im anxiously awaiting the next chapter, i think this is my favorite chapter so far lol

awesome! great eye sizzlage! sweet! what's he gonna say? he just assumes that she'll say yes! lol... i dont know how easy she's gonna make this for him... she's ready to just 'be friends'...haha... great update!

ewww liquified dripping nasal cavaity yuck yuck, i dont think ive every read something so horrific being done with sesshs poison. Couldn't believe sessh actually admitted that ayeka was important to him. Great update but when are you going to update your hellsing fic :(

awww! you know you like him! so cute! loved the chapters! and i dont hate you for the sess lemon! w/ that random girl... its' ok! haha... anyhow, great chapters! can't wait for the next ones!

*sniffle* Okay, I'm crying now. Poor Ayeka. Even though Sesshoumaru is a demon, I still feel like he's being such a jerk. Oooh, I love Kurama. I hope you have a disclaimer up on him. I didn't look, but make sure that you do. It's sweet that you made him such a dear friend to her. Too bad they couldn't get together. I hope he comes back into the picture. He's my favorite Yu Yu character. This is well written and I am enjoying it immensely. If Ayeka is an OC, you've done a great job with your creation. Thanks for a great read and for the regular updates.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

damnit sess! dont ya see? that you're an asshole? lol... great chapter! and your OCs are great! i love sess's dad too! he's always in the background...hmmm...