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by inuyoukai8

person Rawben
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh yey!!!!!! happy thanksgiving to me! naraku blew the hell up...twice. and everyone else is still alive... minus one lecherous monk's hand... ;) and now! on to the babies! and the lovin! and the very long conclusion! :D please! they need happy times! :D and fun lemons for all!
person Rawben
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey! everyone's still alive! ;) and i'm glad her fox friend is here again too! they need all the help they can get! happy thanksgiving eve!
person Snowfall
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, is Naraku finally really and truly dead? That sure was a long battle. Wish I knew what Sess said to Ayeka after he brought her back with Tensaiga. Poor Sessy. Wow, he traipsed over everyone, even his own men. I feel sorry for Inuyasha, having to take Ayeka out. Renewing his vows, eh? That's really sweet. I wonder if Ayeka will ask him to give her the humans again. Kurama almost got his ass kicked! You put up two or three chappies last night after I went to bed. Kudos! Poor Miroku, lost his arm. At least he's alive. I feel sorry for Kagura and Kanna. Well, if the battle is over, I can't wait for the celebrations to begin. Have a great holiday.

Snowfall
person Snowfall
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* That was such a touching chappie. These past few chapters have been exceptionally well done despite a minor amount of typos. The entire fic is well done, but since I'm an action freak and like things to move fast, you've really got me going. Now for the details. Ooooh, Ayeka reeeeaaally liked Sess's pelt. Oh my! Awesome twisty. So sad that Inu had to make that promise to Sess, but Sess was absolutely correct. No one should be above the law. Everything is very well balanced between romance, seduction, angst, action and suspense right now. You are doing an excellent job. Keep up the good work and thanks for being such a swift writer. I think my muse, as well as my energy, have been overtaxed and I'm really letting my readers down. But, never fear! I think I may have one completed tonight!!! Can't wait til your next chappie! WooHoo! *fangirly cheer* Geeze, now look what you've done!

Snowfall
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woohoo you updated, i was watching inuyahsha last night but i fell asleep, it was interesting in this one it had kagura chained up for betraying naraku but then he wanted her to kill onigume guy or something and the onigume guy though kagome was his. And then i had a dream about this story and the episode mixed together but i can't remember it really lol. So sessh has finally learned he can't just tell ayeka what to do, stubborn dog lol. Hey im not even hung over yippi!!! Hey its my cats birthday today, can i get an update for that lol? Thanks for the update lol :)
person Rawben
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. yeah, she deserved that. poor girl! haha! and damn that naraku! can we hurry up and kill him already? lol... ;) oh, and yeah, i second the yey for babies comment...someone said earlier...or something...
person Snowfall
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Kanna covers for Kagura and Sesshoumaru makes amemds to Inu and Ayeka. Kagome forgives Sesshoumaru. Soooo *sniffle* sweet. Ooooh, that bastard Naraku had better not touch our sweet Kagome! I'll have his head on a pole!!!! Such a great chappie. Thanks for 'making it all better'.

Snowfall
person Me
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked that chapter a lot. It paints all the characters as being respectable and brave. Ayeka is such a great character, a person of strong pride and extreme gentalness, I really like her. I can't wait for the whole battle to begin, and I hope the story doesn't end after the battle either :P I want to see many many children for everyone.
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey its my 21st birthday, you should update, im going out to get drunk right now, but ill be back lol
person Rawben
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ouch. that sucks. man, sess is all about the rules eh? damn! anyhow.. great chapter!!! inu better heal before the big battle!!