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by inuyoukai8

person Rawben
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol!! that's hilarious! and...horribly sexy... but ha! totally caught! by your brother-in-law. great stuff...
oh, and fun facts: wolves have the 'wolf's knot'. apparently they swell afterwards, and then the female tries to get away and turns around so that they are stuck end-to-end. ass-to-ass basically. which only brings about the question: how does it bend backwards like that? damn! also: wolves have an actual bone in their penis. so... if you were ever to do a story over kouga... ;) you have some weird science to add in there...
...weird science that i got from the internet that needs to be double checked... but still....
great chapter!!! i'm glad he didn't actually have sex w/ her! ugh.. effin dragon.
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well I guess everything worked out, but still....I didn't like the dragon bit one iota, just so you know lol. However i loved chapter 58 even thought it didn't have the smut in it. It was really clever, the wish ,I have to give you props for that, out of all the fics i've read involving kagome making a wish this one is by far the best and most thought out, that is what should have happened in the actual series. I also liked how rin was related to the priestess, bridge the gap? what does that mean? Bridge the gap between humans and demons? Okay well im off to read chapter 59, and thanks for finally updating monsters and angels, geez ive been bitching enough about it lol.
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS HORRIBLE!!!!!!!!, HORRIBLE!!!!! HORRIBLE!!!! HOW COULD YOU ALLOW THAT!!!! I HOLD YOU PERSONALLY RESPONSIBLE, okay ill stop using caps now. Why I ask you? Those filthy dragons, when they die sessh better do more then drop acid in their eyes that dissolves their face. Thats just not right, im sad now. Fix it, make it all a nightmare!!! Please I beg you...really bad things aren't supposed to happen to good people, dont you know that? and you desicrated my innocent trust and belief in this system, im tainted now with the evils of the world:( lol
person Snowfall
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to cry at the end. Oh, that was horrible. Thank you for not making even worse. Poor Ayeka and Sess. I can't wait for Sess and Inu to kick some friggin' demon ass! Great chappie.

Snowfall
person Style
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the great story. I like it very much.!!
person Snowfall
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A toast of smiles all around! Wonderful two chappies. Oh yeah, Sess did some damage alright and he healed his wounded mate. 'Locked', eh? Mmmm. Interesting picture. I still have a smile on my face. Can't wait for the weddings and such.

Snowfall
person Me
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god dragons! Yay, I hope this is a sign that the story will be staying around for a bit longer.
person Me
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the darkness! The darker the better I always say, it makes the story more enjoyable when they are saved from the brink of despair. I can't tell you how much I love this story!
person Snowfall
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Dragons! As well written as ever. Off to the next chappie!

Snowfall
person Me
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, where's my update? I'm waiting on pins and needles here! You're so cruel. lol, Keep em' comin'!