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by inuyoukai8

person BrownRecluse
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've only started to read this, but it's a great story so far and you DO NOT, NOT, NOOOOOOOT suck at summaries -- so quit saying that, already!
person Snowfall
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...this was so good that I read it straight through. Well written, just about everything that can be in a fic included; great plot, characters that are IC, angst, romance, action, (a bit many lemons), Kouga, original pairings, and a laughing Sesshoumaru. Very few typos. Definitely an enjoyable read and I look forward to the next chapter.

Snowfall
person Rawben
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...damnit!! a cliffhanger!??? UPDATE SOON!!! is she going to be ok?????????????
person Rawben
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lil boxes for miro and inu? what are those? huh... and also, what about the military people? wont they be suspicious that she's been gone for a long time and she had a fight with a white demon from the sky that took her away? anyhow, great chapter!!!! and i hope they get back through the mirror w/o any problems...
person Rawben
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol...
sess: oh hale no.
hehe... great chapter!
person Rawben
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol!!! oh inu! hehe... too funny... oh! but poor kagura! ugh! normally i'm ok w/ non con, but i was really pissed at naraku! he needs to get killed already... that asshole... i wonder how many times naraku has died in all of these fan fics... almost all of them... and there's a lot!...anyhow, great chapter!!! your chars are great!
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its always amusing to watch inuyasha and koga fight, wonder if kagome is ever going to take the necklace off, hopefully not it entertaining to watch her use it. Ayeka has a point with the guns and grenades but don't know it that is such a good idea to introduce them to an earlier period. Kinda reminds me of the delimma in the last samuri. Where some of the japanese wanted to keep the code and honor of the samuri and still use swords.
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i knew right when she asked what he would give her, she would ask to use the mirror lol, can't wait to see sessh's reaction
person Anon
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, I thought that sessh was worried they couldn't have kids for some reason in earlier chapters. Defintely a hot chapter, can't wait for the next one *hint, hint, wink wink, nudge nudge*, this school is taking too much a way from you updating and i dont like it not one bit, i say quit!!!!! lol sorry that was the bad me speaking
person Anon
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yippi you updated, that was hot, can't wait for the next installment :)