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Love the story, keep up the great work

So that what was written in the letter huh????? I'm so like twirling around in my chair I don't know why I'm so happy being that this chapter wasn't happy! I feel like this rite now @o@ like that dude in that painting you know that painting everyone knows that painting!!!! Looking forward to your update tonight or tomorrow or....

That's right Hitomi kicks ASS! That is what they get for plotting and how dare Kagome try to kill her all her boohooing is justified that bitch! Selfish bitch and Hotaru is just as selfish! Damn but Sesshomaru was right on target tossing the damn dagger I could so see that damn arrogant son of a bitch do that too. That's all good though cuz he knows Hitomi can wipe the damn tatami mats with his furry ass hah!

Update.

hey you cheater! i was soo happy to see this at the top of the list, but there is no new chapter! you tricky tricky beast!

Hitomi did a great job of hiding who she really was while Sess, Inuyasha, and Shippo was having that meeting. None of them noticed the change. Then for her to trick Inuyasha into having sex with her - whoo. I also really enjoyed the fight between Shippo and Hitomi. But PLEASE don't let her kill him. I'm off to read more.

Okay. I just want you to know I'm all in tears over here. The whole Kagome and Miroku part was pretty stinking sad! Than you go and make it heart renching with Hitomi almost killing Shippo, and Inuyasha loosing it and doing what he did. You have an art in writing drama!

SO MUCH IS GOING ON IN THIS CHAPTER AND IT"S ALL SO GOOOOD!!!! Poor Kagome watching her friends die like that. I know she must have felt it was her fault becuase she wasn't fast or strong enough. But in all truth I think she is stronger then what she thinks she is, because how else could she see in the future. I also liked that Miroku was able to apologize to Inuyasha and let him know what had really happen. Maybe it will help Inuyasha to heal those old wounds. And Miroku said he knows whats wrong with Hotaru. Well so do I and I know this cliamax has to be just getting started. I can't wait for all your other surprises and to see how you plan on ending this. I hope it's a happy ending. Well update soon!

i love this part of stories where all the little clues from the past chapters, the ones where most people just read past them and later forget, start to come into play. oh and thanks for the list of anime! ive seen fushigi yugi and looooved it! now all i need to know is who hitomi is, and my world will once again be whole... you dont want me to live in a broken world do you??? didnt think so ;) update soon! p.s. usually if its your first time overdrafting if you go to the bank branch they will cancel the charges... ive dont it like, 3 times now! not kidding... or if you overdrafted for some stupid reason they usualy let you off

Please update soon.

Oh my word where do I even begin? Well I must say that Kagome journal entry I guess she wrote that before she slept with Miroku right? Well, it was horrible how she had to witness the death of her friends and how she felt she really couldn't help. I guess too that it's human to feel the loss for someone else and at the same time feel thankful for what you didn't lose. I know that sounds bad...but we all do it. If two mothers let their children play in the yard and one had gotten really hurt the mother of the child that didn't get hurt will feel thankful. It's human nature, but I guess that is why this story is so lifelike.

I am happy to see that Shippo is infact alright I was worried there for a minute. I also like the fact that Inyasha and Miroku made up in a sense. Now what is going on with Hotaru and Kagome did that really happen. I don't want to give too much away just in case someone hasn't read it yet, but my word the struggles this girl goes through this is going to have a happy ending right? You are still my favorite author so no matter what I will read it.