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for Betrayal's Gift

by LdyMoon

person morgan
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can not wait until the enxt chapter is up thank you for writing this for sharing it with us
person Satsurunu
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say your story is really good! I didn't sleep all night because I just coulnd't stop reading.
person The real Hotaru
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think your evil for leaving off were you did! I need to know what happens next, so please update soon. Maybe two chaps this time *smiles sweatly*
person Lily
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it is completly different from anything i have ever read in my life keep it up
person chanda
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, been a while... unfortunetly my computer crashed...so I had some catching up to do... wow!!!

Well I hope you have a wonderful Holiday... and look forward until your next update.

Chanda
person CHUBBERS
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah! watch out now Hotaru's gonna be kickin some demon ass! that was still rather nasty of you to end it where you did. so for your punishment you have to email me the next chapter before you post it okay? dont like it? hmmm.... next time dont leave me with a cliffy you sneaky snake!
person Miroku's Dream
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH ooohhh ohh I thought she had the shikon in her. Yeah that's why she has two personalties using both sides of it's power. So, how is she going to get the jewel out of her body? Maybe after she takes the jewel out she'll be fine right??? And Kagome keeps surprising me she shouldn't surprise me anymore but she does. You paint Kagome in such a sad and ugly life but than again I can see this of her too. It's weird how it's OOC but not. Can't wait for the next read

Carmen
person Twirly twirly
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So very good so very very good! I knew she had the jewel in her I knew it I'm so happy I had to post!
person The real Hotaru
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no he didn't just say what he did. I'm so shocked I don't even know what to say. No, I take that back. He is so going to get his butt kicked! I know he probibly didn't get to finish what he was saying, but still. I tell you the drama just kepts on coming. It's a good thing we're getting it week by week other wise we'd all be in hospitals from drama over load.

P.S. OH YEAH, I KNEW IT ALL ALONG. But you did give a lot of clues through out the story. Hopefully everyones on the same page now, If not...
person Angel
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! I CAN'T BELIEVE HE SAID THAT! THEY ARE IN DEEEEEP DOO DOO! Great chapter great story can't wait for next week and Hell yeah I'm ready for Turkey day!