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Update soon love it!
I hate Kagome and Miroku too!
(Lol it's like the first bark of my dog... she was too just a tiny tiny puppy then and she let out a huge roar like bark. Me then ===>> O_o;)

Thank you for notifying me that you updated the story. It was a short chapter but it was well worth it. I wonder what Sesshomaru is going to do and Rin is married with children wow. She's grown some. I wonder will you write a story about that or put it somewhere in this story. Please update soon.

I just wanted to say about Intent Observer's review. It was a good review and I understand what that person was talking about since at first I was like wow, Inuyasha is going to get with Kagome's daughter that is wierd, but then I looked at it like this Inuyasha never had Kagome and he never told Kagome his true feelings so in reality Kagome didn't belong to him. I understand that when he gets with Hotaru is he loving Hotaru for herself or because she reminds him of Kagome, but didn't Kagome remind him of Kikyo? You keep up the good work, so far every story that I have read by you always left me satisfied so I trust what your writing about.

Please notify me again when you update and please don't take so long this time.

Your fan Cathy

Thanks for the update, that was sooner than the last. Well where do I start I mean, what is Inu-Yasha up too and wow, Hotaru is very powerful, I totally felt sorry for her when Kagome her own mom used priestess power to shover her away. I can't wait to read what you post next. Oh, another thing I noticed about your writing is that it flows. I get pictures in my head its like I'm watching a movie or the show and in thirty minutes its over so I sit and wait til the next episode. PLZZZZZZZE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

Nice chapter three if I do say so myself and the cliffhange with inuyasha is going be driving me nuts until the next chapter. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.

*blinks* Ohhs on what Kagome said after giving birth!! What are Inuyasha's wishes going to be? Oh that's going to be interesting. I love the way you are doing this. So many cliffies though. *swats them* hehehe!! Hope to see more soon!!

Oh my where do I start, well, I wonder what Kagome meant by the child is yours inuyahsa since your saying that Hotaru is Miroku's daughter. And Miroku is taking medicine for a sexual disease, this is just breaking my heart, he's too cute for that. It also seems that Hotaru is very powerful I am excited to see where this story is going. I feel like I am riding on a roller coaster and what did Inuyasha wish for? Please update when you have the time of coarse and hopefully that is soon. Please email me when you update. Thanks.

very good story so far looking forward to more chaoters in the furure

Wow, ok, let me start with chapter one, I felt so bad for Inu-Yasha I mean I love him so him getting hurt really hurted my feelings, but this was like so real!!! People do things like that all the time. And in chapter two, this girl Hotaru well she's mysterious but is she from sailor moon? Everytime I hear or see Hotaru I think of sailor moon. Pleassssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon I can't wait to see what is going to happen next, this is a cool story.

oh BTW this is my first time reviewing on a story here on AFF.

this is a great story so far i look forward to seeing more chapters

*Blinks* Ohss this is looking good. Oh poor Inuyasha and Hotaro!! Then Kagome popping pills. *blinks* I really like this, its different for what I normally see here. Cannot wait to see more of this!!

Tainted Dreams aka YoukaiObsessed