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First, I would like to start out by saying, I've read most of your stories and I think you almost put the real writer to shame becasuse your stories are so good. I wish she would let you take over from where she left off. I think you would do a great job writing out the story lines and portraying each of the characters. With that said, now I'd like to comment on this story. I felt bad for kagome but I'm happy she took action and kicked Miroku out. I know it had to be hard on her after all this isn't what she pictured her life like, although she should of expected it. I love your cliff hangers! Hotaru and her moms old arrow "WOW". Can't wait to read chapter nine.


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Ohhs so Inuyasha and Shippo found her. I feel bad for Inuyasha, I can understand the way he is feeling right now.--But Hotaru is not the one to blame. Poor girl has been to hell and back, a few times. Great update, at least the cliff wasn't as high this time!

GIRL, like always you out did your self! I hope all ends well, although I'm enjoying the ride. I'm looking for the clues you are leaving though out your story as to who Hotaru really is, but I must say who ever she is - she rocks!

-ME-
Heart beating fast
Slow to exhale
Mouth dropped open
Eyes opened wide....

Inu Yasha meets Hotaru!

OK, InuYasha sounds hotter then ever!!!!!!!! (Yum Yum - lick lips - all hot and bothered) Little Shippo all grown up doesn't sound to bad him self! ( If only I was younger & a Cartoon of course)

So they smell Kagomes blood in her. What about Miroku's? I just know eventually Hotaru and InuYasha are going to get together even though he can't stand the smell of her right now. I think that would be great. They both need someone to help find love, hope, and trust in their heart for the human race. After all it was humankind that hurt and hardened their hearts to the world. Maybe together they will have peace. I don't think it would be wierd for them to get together after all He and Kogome never did anything.

Hotaru

Let the drama begin. I kinda wanna see Inuyasha confront Kagome and Miroku, and either tramatize them with words or burn the shrine and well house or something. Much suffering is needed and deserved.

Wow Ldy your are so awesome lovin this story and guess what my girlfriends are all like into Inuyasha now just from reading your story. Oh they told me to tell you that they loved your other story especially the sex scenes yeah I know they are just hard up lol so please keep it comin or did we reach our quota and are you gonna post the other chap up. *BLINK* bLINK* with pleding eyes.....

HELL'S BELL'S the freakin girl got raped I mean I feel so bad that I had to step away from my freakin CPU I felt that intrusions what the hell is wrong with that Boy he is sick...... you know the old saying payback is a bitch........I know this slime will get his and more come on girl finish the story and Inu needs to start being flipin more nice It wouldn't kill him ya know.......

You need to hurry up and I just wanna say that I Love your story and I appreciate your writing skill now I don't wanna sound all stuck up but did we meet your quota of how many folks that wanna read the next chap cause girl I have my box of tissues and my box of chocolates with me so I'm ready to read.......

WE HAVE MET YOUR DEMANDS SO HAND OVER THE NEXT CHAP NICE AND SLOWLY NOW LOL COME ON GIRL GIMME GIMME GIMME.......

This is a coolie story, email me back when u update I really like it