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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad some friendly people found Hotaru. I loved how she was able to defend herself! Ohhs that's going to be interesting on how her and Inuyasha get together! Hope to see more soon!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You had me with the title so I was intrigued I was further pulled in with your summary. Curious now I read chapters 1-10 and I must say:
YOU FREAKIN ROCK MAN! I mean damn your female character is riding a roller coaster life and I'm just along for the ride and dog boy is now what? A freakin bad ass demon dressed in silks and armary and shit. You have a good imagination are there other stories you've written? Its like I'm there ya know?
Your ass better update soon!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU FREAKIN ROCK MAN! I mean damn your female character is riding a roller coaster life and I'm just along for the ride and dog boy is now what? A freakin bad ass demon dressed in silks and armary and shit. You have a good imagination are there other stories you've written? Its like I'm there ya know?
Your ass better update soon!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! I comand more human sotry teller! I canot rest till this tale is finished! *shifty eyes*
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First I want to apologize that I haven't reviewed in a while. With school being out I went home for the holidays and as usual some drama, turkey, gossip, forgiveness and then everyone is happy. I haven't been able to get to a pc :P
ok, chapter eight I was floored Kagome needed to kick Miroku's ass, she saved his damn life! No matter what their marriage is like he should keep his damn dick to himself! ok I needed to let that out. I've got some real issues here. I'm off to read the next chappy :)
ok, chapter eight I was floored Kagome needed to kick Miroku's ass, she saved his damn life! No matter what their marriage is like he should keep his damn dick to himself! ok I needed to let that out. I've got some real issues here. I'm off to read the next chappy :)
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter nine was great! Shippo seems to be really good looking, like he's about 15/16 yrs old? Still, he seems yummy and Inu Yasha wow, he's like Sesshomaru now! But there is still a gentle side of him he can't change completely right? Hotaru is going to soften him up. Anyway, Inu Yasha is so very hot hot hot hot!!!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOl I still say its weird, but I will continue to read this... I am not flaming. I love your discriptiveness ( if thats even a word) very well written.
well I am strapped in my seat and awaiting the ride.
Until next chap,
Chanda
well I am strapped in my seat and awaiting the ride.
Until next chap,
Chanda
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright I had gotten comfortable reading three chaps in a row and now I wish there was another one since you left it OPEN! You are the queen of cliff hangers. Another good chap. Hotaru is so intense with her powers, more so than Kagome was when she arrived in the past. Kagome needed Inu Yasha to help her out and it seems that Hotaru can handle her business. Well, you said you left clues as to who she is...is she Midoriko reincarnated? Since I know she is not Kikyo she doesn't look like Kikyo.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story so far. I love it. The fact that Inuyasha is more like Sesshomaru kicks ass, hopefully he will at least keep the looks he has now. U really flipped it when Kagome cheated on him, even I got angry. Hopefully u will keep on with the great story that im already a fan of. Peace and have a nice Thanksgiving. 1.
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! I knew it was going to happen, I knew Kagome would be pissed off. I know I was when I found out my ex was cheating on me. Oh my and poor Hotaru, she tried to committ suicide didn't she? I saw that you held the story up for ransom you evil woman. I'm sorry I couldn't read your story any sooner, I've been busy with the family. Had to go and see them for the holidays. Anyway, I'm off to read chapter nine.
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was not expecting Inuyasha to be so mean, I mean I know he was supposed to be mean but he's mean! I have a question though, why couldn't they smell Miroku's blood? Or do they just think it's Kagome's since she was the only other person to ever come through the well? Can you answer that question? I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, will Inuyasha learn Hotaru's parentage and how would he react? I just hope that everyone has a happy ending.
I hope that you and yours have a happy thanksgiving as well!
I hope that you and yours have a happy thanksgiving as well!