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for Betrayal's Gift

by LdyMoon

person Moon Angel
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha is so hot yet I feel so bad for him. I wonder how this is going to turn out. He obviously still has feelings for Kagome that he hasnt put away yet and he is going to have feelings for Hotaru. Im at the edge of my seat here wondering what is going to happen next keep up the good work. Update soon.
person Colleen
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT WAS SO AWSOME SO FAR WHEN R U GONNA PUT THE NEXT ONE UP I LOVED IT I WAS SAD WHEN IT ENDED AND THER WAS NO NEXT CHAPTER, I CANT WAITE TO READ THE REST OF IT, COUNTIN AND WAITIN ON IT.^_^^_^^_^
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhs Inuyasha buys and sells slaves! I love it! Wahoooo on the dirty talk! Inuyasha is a naughty boy! Hot lemon! I find him extremely hot like you have him!--Ut-oh she said those three little words to him. I felt bad for her, and for him later. --Thank you on the kind words, I really haven't done anything. Hope to see more soon!
person Cathy
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My word he is so cold he is still the same Inuyasha but cold. I love how you have that he buys and sells slaves and that he picked up that habit from his brother. I felt so bad for that demon slave girl. I wonder how is he going to fall in love with Hotaru what is going to make them fall in love? I can't wait to read so update soon.

Cathy
person youkailover
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kick ass story. update soon liked to see more of this.
person chanda
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked your update, Inuyasha is very cold, and he still loves Kagome, this should be very interesting. Very excited on what you have in your next chapters to come.

Look forward until your next update,
Chanda
person Angel
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Hotaru is just so powerful, she has to be Midoriko's reincarnation right? I'm soooo excited about your next chp. Can't wait to read it. I actually came on to see if chp 11 was posted. Please update soon.
person Cathy
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well let me start by saying this update soon. I can't wait to read the lemon with Inuyasha. The name by the way is unique and beautiful for your daughter. Please email me the update alright.
person Moon Angel
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see that my review didn't post because of the "glitch" so I'll do it again. Please UPDATE SOON! I can't wait I mean I feel all these emotions its like watching a sci-fi fantasy movie on lifetime or something I'm like GOD! I go to bed thinking what your next chapter is going to be like.
person Linda
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how you put this one together with "is this a dream?" and then the little girl who turns demon and trys to eat her, to top it off her powers are really strong. Great job as usual.