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for Betrayal's Gift

by LdyMoon

person Angel
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Sesshomaru is sooooo cute!!!!!! I loved how he was O__O @ his lil brother having a threesome and just sitting there as if nothing, like he wasn't affected a bit! But let me go back a minute k...k. First I have to say Hotaru is the bomb I mean she kicked some youkai ass! I mean really, she pinned Sessh in a power head lock. Ok, back to Inu and Sessh. I just loved that scene I thought it was so true to their characters. I was laughing my ass when Inu had to send the girls away cuz he couldn't concentrate with his brother sitting there just watching and waiting and then for Sessh to say you stink oh, I was like that is so them!!!!!

Can't wait to read the next chap thanks for this one before the holidays! MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO!!!!!

person sesshywife
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how in the hell do you find time to wright this story being pregnant and all oh well good story
can't wait to see how it ends and my baby sesshy in this story sounds so cute and cool i hope he finds a mate
namely me of coarse. great story update soon and merry christmas or happy holidays.
person Cathy
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I have to say wow, Hotaru is very powerful to put Sesshomaru under her spell. That surprised me. Sesshomaru watching his brother have sex with how many concubines? I thought it was funny when Inu couldn't perform. Well, Good job on this one I could really visualize it. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Linda
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
??????? I have no idea what to say! That was great hope you update soon.
person silent pluto
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i love your story. I'ved got a sneaky suspicion about hotaru. In truth she is a freak, but what the hay? lol Nice story, keep updating, it's great.
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhs Sesshoumaru is a voyeur! Poor Nari--I was surprised that Inuyasha sold her! Loved the chapter, lots of buildup in it. Cannot wait to see where you are going to take this!--Ohhs another video game player. I did not know you was into those also! In a little more than 24 hours I plan to have my fingers wrapped around the new Kingdom Hearts game, and Mortal Kombat. I am like a kid waiting to rip those packages to shreds. Shame on me, being an adult and acting like that--Hehe!~~ Good luck with the puppy! I am so glad to see that you updated! Thank-you!
person chubbers
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay i dont know how often you read your email, but i heard you were having problems training your puppy, so i thought i would try and help ya a little.... loooove the stories! kepp up the great work!!!
person M&M
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Cant wait to read your next chapter. Please Update soon!
person Angel
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT WAS IN THE LETTER!!!!! HOW CAN YOU WRITE THAT AND NOT TELL US YOUR SO EVILLLLLL!!!!

No really your kewl, I didn't mean that @ all. Kewl cliffy just makes me want to beg for an answer right now. PLZZZZ UPDATE, you know you wanna.

Merry X-MAS to you and your family, hope santa gives you great gifts, oh wait, he did you have the Inuyasha game. Hope my boyfriend buys it for me as my secret santa. ~~ shifty eyes~~
person InTent rEadER
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon good chptr.