rate_review Reviews

I just wanted to say that this story is fantastic! I am so intrigued with Hotaru like she is so the best priestess or something. Really this story should win an award it is so believable. It's like it's really happening or something. This could be someones life minus the well, the demons and the spiritual powres but, other than that it's true to life. I went to school with a girl like that Fuu she pisted em off conitinuously. I mean damn I wanted to kick her ass, but, I always tried to be the nice person. I think that sometimes when I met her again in a class reunion or something I would give it to her then since, I'm going to be a distinguished woman while she turns out to be trailor trash. Anyway, I really like this story, please email me when you update kay?

Ohhs that was close... I thought for sure she was going to catch Inuyasha in the house. I love how Kagome and Miroku made up, then onto a lemon. Wahooooooo! Then her waking and sensing and thinking of Inuyasha. Hehe- you and the cliffys. I guess I need to put some sexy muses at the bottom of your cliffs, so when I fall off, I have something to land on! Hope to see more soon! Happy New Year to you!

OK. I'm done now! I needed a box of tisue for that one. I feel so bad for EVERYONE! Even the love sceen had a sad twist to it. You are the master.

I hope you finsh the story before the baby is born, other wise I'm going to find where you live and watch the baby while you complete this story, and I wont leave until it is done. Don't play with me, I want my happy ending!

:) Hotaru

My (Hotaru) powers are growing very strong now. To think she went in to Sesshomearu's mind and showed him what he feared most; Naraku. Even though she went into her parents mind before it wasn't the same. She was going to kill Sesshomaru. Whats more, when Shippo jump in to save Sesshomaru her purple ray of death didn't affect him a bit, even tough he was in the way of it. She is so powerful! I have an idea on who she really is, but I'm not going to write it down here, because I don't want to mess it up for everone else. But than again why wouldn't I know, after all I am The REAL Hotaru!!!

P.S. The whole Inu Yasha and Sesshomaru thing was great and pretty funny too.

The opening scene was so life like, I mean, it was so intense it was like I was watching a lifetime show or something. My heart was racing as I had been waiting for this confrontation and how you described her gran-mama I was like, oh my god. I was feeling it in my heart for this girl. And then when she realized that her father heard her words I was like OH MY WORD! I couldn't stop reading this chapter, my 8 yr old son kept trying to get my attention and I told him to leave me alone for a few minutes to go and play his video games. And then when Inu came to the house I was expecting chaos, but instead you built it up even more, making me wait for his reaction. I loved how he broke the picture of Kag's wedding. I just know your going to have everyone happy in this story in the end right? If you don't I'll have to find you, hunt you down and severly chasitise you and make you re-write the end. (ha ha ha)

Oh by the way I wasn't kidding. (hahaha)

And I CRY..........

A very good story so far. Alot of angsiety though. What i was wondering was if Inuyasha wuold every forgive Kagome and Miroku. If you ask me, you should write that he never forgives them. And i just remembered something. you said that inuyasha found a jeani and that he got wishes. well jeanis are suposed to give 3 wishes but we have only been told of 1. is it that the jeani only grants one wish but it can be anything?
hmmm.... i really have a lot of questions about this story, like what caused you to put in that rape seen, and what gave you the idea of kagome and Miroku conseaving a child?
I will ask more questions but only after you update. Hope its soon.

Happy 2006, my resolution is to quit smoking, yet never happens...


Loved the update, hoping that Kags would of caught Inu...yet I know you have something else is up your sleeve... LOL

Chanda

This charpter is VERY DEEEEP! It was fate that brought them two together all those years ago. And how sad that after all the years they have been married they never fell in love. I was happy for a moment when Kagome wasn't all druged up, I thought maybe...but then she was all like "we have to talk now or else" because she was about to take some more drugs. It made me mad that even with Hotaru missing she was still just thinking about her next fix. I do feel bad for her because she feels her life is just a BIG lie. And that letter????? Can't wait to find out what it says. I know what ever it is, we're all going to be "WOW"ed, after all you are the writer!

Sorry took so long to review, but I've been busy taking care of my grandparents. I'll read the others soon!

Pleaase update! Please please pleaase!!