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Alright I've absolutely lost all my nerves. I am shocked that she's pregnant and that she has a split personality like a sybil or something! Her grand mother!!!! The only person she ever felt to have loved her is now in the hospital badly injured while the split tries to abort the baby!!!!

I must say I can't wait to see what happens next yet I'm scared. I'll be looking forward to your update.

Sorry I have not reveiwed in a while but I had some family matters to take care of. I'm happy Hotaru is home. This whole chapter was touching. I don't believe Inu Yash was in the house. I thought he was going to kill them when he saw the wedding picture. that flash back was off the chain. Now let me read the other.

I can wait to see where this going with Inu Yasha! What is he planning? On the second half of the sorry I feel bad for Fuu. I konw it was her plan to hurt Hotaru, but I think her going crazy would of been all the punishment she needed. I guess I'm just to nice. Anyway, you did a great job!

Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile but the story looks great and it is starting to have a very well written plot. Thanks for the heads up on the new chapter and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.

I wounder if anyone else noticed that when Hotaru want to the doctors office she sign in under the village healers name "Naoko" ? Great story all together. The whole thing was full of bad and shocking news. I Well, I have some pretty bad and shocking news too...I'm go to DIE...If you don't up date soon!I...need...more!!! (--^^--^-^------------------------------------------------------) < This will be me at the hospital on sunday. You have until than, to save me!

You are the Queen! As if we didn't feel bad enough for poor Hotaru, now she's with child. Are you tring to make our hearts bleed for this girl? How much worse can it get for her? The one person she feels really loves her she pushes down the stairs as her alter ego. Not only that, but then she tries to kill the baby. She must feel lost right now. And just when you think her family life might get better it turns out she has a new found hate for her mother. I know its only going to get harder for her. All the pain this girl has been through you BETTER give her a happy ending!!!
@_@ Hotaru

Oh I'm speechless, didnt expect that. I'm glad that she had a heart to heart with her father. I hope she can forgive her mom as well...not to mention that she is now pregnant...

Look forward until your next chapter.
Chanda

This is an interesting story. I didn't know you were so creative. I hope that this girl has a better life, but if she ever needs a lawyer to file her claim and take up her case, she should call on me. I'd have that little rat bastard in a cage somewhere. Anyway, she has some problems she also has a dual personality that keeps the story very interesting. And Inuyasha well, he's still Inuyasha I wonder how your planning on making it work for these two.

I'm so like going crazy here myself she's pregnant!!!!! Now she's another person!!!!! And her grandmother was pushed!!!!!!!
God girl you can write a freakin story. Hell yeah I'm so ready to find out what happens next.

ps on your pup, sorri to hear that you had to give her up, U'r still a good momma, you sent her off to someone who would love her, though you made the greater sacrifice for her comfort, so, that makes you the greatest momma in teh world!!! ::smile k ::

im glad youre still updating! im not sure where your going with this story, but i hope she doesnt have the baby...... im sorry you had you give away your puppy, but at least you sent her to a good home. amd you did try your best. just think of it this way, maybe if you didnt have her she would have gone to a bad home where nobody took care of her but never bothered to give her away. i believe you did the right thing, considering your puppy's feelings, and not wanting to keep her in her kenel all day. cheer up!! ^_^