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:D that was a good chapter had a lil bit of everything. I feel so bad for Inu everyone on his case the big fight between him and sess was classic.
So I'm goin to turn into a twissler huh? I'm off to read the next chappy.

A TWISSLER!!! YOU SAID I'D BE TWISTED LIKE A TWISSLER! YOUR PREGGERS FOR CRYING OUT LOUD AND YOU KILLED A BABY! I'M LIKE SO CRYING RIGHT NOW AND IN SHOCK. SHES SEVERLY BEATEN AND THEN AND THEN SHE KILLS THEM WHICH THEY DESERVE BUT, YOU DID IT.

OK, now that I can stop screamin I am so sad and now I don't know what is going to happen to her. I cant believe I have to wait another week for the answer. I'm still like @L@ I am so numb now I wont be able to sleep with this on my mind. I'm going to be so sad at school now thanks alot. But that was a very good chapter I just wished you put in the next one saying that Inuyasha is going to take care of her now.

Unbrake my heart plz u have to update my friend told me that this was going to be sad and she was all silent about it I wasnt expectign it to be like this. I cant think breath or even feel right now how do you do it, how did you make me emotionally feel for this girl? Un do this hurt you caused when you wrote this chpt and make me happy again.

i amlost gaged when i was reading the part where yuy killed hotaru's baby! i still have a lump in my throat..... but for some reason i knew she wasnt going to have it.... how do you come up with this shit?

Darn, I was hoping I would be able to review before you posted your new story tonight. Oh, well, I guess that just means I am the first one to read chapter 20 : )

I think 19 was great! Definatly true to each of their characters. I wouldn't change a thing. Although, I hope to read more about Hotaru and Inu Yasha soon.

I haven't had a good day and was upset to see so few people reviewed. I say if the next chapter doesn't get at less ten reviews hold a randsom for a dozon! HA HA HA *evil laugh* That will get some of your readers typing!

GIRL LET ME TELL YOU...I gasped, I cried, and I'm just now starting to breath again! That was your most powerful piece of writing ever. My husband even had to stop and read it. You should get the best writer of the year award, and it's only February!

And by the way, I needed my asthma pump for this one!

PLLLLEEEAAASSSEEE UPDATE! THIS IS GOOD

Well, that was a cute chapter with Ayame she is so sweet. You show that Inuyasha has a real family now. The closeness he has with Ayame was so endearing I was like "AWWW" The festival sounded like a big to do too. Well, this was another good chapter, you don't need me to tell you and I can't wait to be twisted up like a twizler.

That's cool you don't want to let me know if I am right or not, but, I think I'm right. I'm right right? Ahh bet you didn't fall for that. I am so tempted right now to put my anwser down here, but, I don't want to ruin it for anyone else who is reading this story.

My favorite scene in this chp is the way Sesshomaru kicked ass on the youkai insulting his brother, it was so in character I could see it happening vividly, the way Inuyasha responded was classic Inu. Waiting with patience for your next chapter.

Sorry I didn't review sooner I had a car accident last Saturday. Both cars have no hope, but on the bright side no one was hurt too badly. My arm still hurts so this review will not be too long. I think you did a great job on both stories. I see your plot just keeps on thickening. I totally loved your pairings and you can bet I'll read your next story, after all you are my favorite writer!