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Ok can you say OOOOhh my gosh where did that come from what are you trying to make me do now beg for you to write more and you know the baby was a tear can you say jerker I look around my room and think wow I got to leave the computer to breath for a moment then I come back I don't know thinking maybe if I stay away from the comptuer you want kill the baby.....but yet again I read the baby dead.......you have me caught in the game (meaning this story of your) Do I HAVE TO SAY IT AGAIN ......... well I guess I do ,,,,,,,,UPDATE WOMAN UPDATE. lol I'll be waiting by the computer to see if you have written anything yet..........so keep those stories coming.

I don't know where to begin, I am so stunned, shocked, hurt, I had to reread what you wrote just to make sure you wrote it. You've never written anything like that before. I was so unprepared. My husband came home and saw me crying. I told him to read it and he couldn't even make a comment. Let me tell you something, I had to wait a couple of days to write this review. I couldn't write it then because I was too distraught. Please, when you update, please let something happy happen. And please explain where this came from. This was still a good chapter, it was just to realistic. I could see it happening. I can still see it in my head and that lump in my throat comes back. LdyMoon, please update soon and please let it be happy.

What the Hhhhellll is going on I leave your story just for a moment and I come back and you done killed the kid thats so sick its so depraved *sigh* more more I tell ya I love it well I really hated that part it felt wayyy and I mean way to freakin real.. I will have to keep on my game to see when you UPDATE so hurry up......

Is it alright to look at the screen now where in all of the 7 hells did you get all that emotion to write such a chapter.....please keep it up.

Uhhhh what just happened the baby is dead what ____BLINK _______BLINK______ DID I read that write or am I just dazed and confused now don't answer all at once if you say lady moon I'm dazed and confused I'll believe it cause right now I can't believe the baby is DEAD and that just breaks my heart........now my cat thinks I'm crazy cause all I can do is just cry right now......update soon ........ :( wahhhhhh I think I need more tissue.

I can't breath its caught in my chest and I think I'm gonna cry where did you go within your soul to pull something like that out........ok I Will have to now keep holding my breath and wait till you update.

I use this name because I love the ocean but now I really feel blu after reading that chap hell's bell woman I can't even look at the t.v. right now cause if I see a kid I think I would really cry and my boyfriend is still cursing ..

love it wahhhhh yes I'm so happy I'm gonna stop crying write more but make it more happy please.

Damn that is some pretty fucked up shit there but it was a very good chapter any woman who has to go through something like that where did you get this material in yor head them muses must have been feeling violent. I'm still like damn

Wows- What a dark chapter! I was kind of expecting that, but the way you did it was really good. Dayum, then the way she killed those men.--Ohhs so Shippo saw all of this. Wonder if he will tell Inuyasha, and what his response if and when he finds out. Good chapter!

~Tainted~