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I really like this story. I especially enjoyed how you brought Hotaru and Hitomi back together.

This was such a good story a great story cant wait to read the epilogue please enjoy your holiday

I don't know what to say...I was crying when Miroku died everyone is dead...but I know that something will happen at the end of the story something good! I hope!

Damn that was some intense moments right there. I could see InuYasha like totally loosing it. I...I was choked up for real too. I mean and than you say that there is one more chapter and that's it???? I'm like how can that be this isn't happy. I mean I pretty sure that Hotaru is going to kick some major ass right and than she and Inuyasha will be together but...what about Shippo, damn even Miroku and Kagome since you know they had to betray Inuyasha to get the jewel back so it's not there fault really???? So many questions and one more chapter to answer them in.

sniffle sniffle I can't believe it's almost over!!!! But it was soo good looking forward to the end of this week! I can't wait to see what happens.

Another very intense chapter from you. I heart the way you have pulled everything together.

I cannot wait to see/read the fight between the two of them.

Thank you!

~Tainted

Oh my word this was such an intense chapter I feel so bad for everyone. What is going to happen next I wonder. I am so sad to know that there is only one chapter left. This is one of my favorite stories by you. It is the best drama story to date and I'm not just saying that.

I was cracking up about your son that is so funny. But don't feel bad he'll grow out of it soon and go like "normal people". Trust me I had three boys who didn't want to use the potty up until kindergarden.

oh its so sad the story is coming to an end! *snif*snif* im so proud of you for completeting this story! this is my favorite story ever!

I can't believe that I am totally stunned...I say this because you threw so many curve balls I didn't have time to hit any. First: I was not expecting Hotaru/Hitomi to be the shikon no tama...that was brilliant I loved how you brought out that the jewel always finds its way back and it came back through Miroku's seed back to it's protector in an infant....I've got to give you a five to ten thumbs up for that originality! That is brillance in its making folks right there. I'm surprised more people haven't commented on that! We've all been wondering or at least we've all believed at least for my part that she was midoriko or something but not the jewel itself. Two: The way you made the knowledge of what they are how can I put this well how Hitomi took advantage of the situation now knowing why she is the way she is and how she decided to come to life by taking Shippo's yet again and this time for real I was like damn it's for real this time. Third: The scene with Kagome keening for her daughter that was felt I saw the agony and the heart brake well from all the party. It was the best chapter I beleive.

I do need to make one comment though and it's not a biggy...the little section where Shippo is concerned was a bit confusing I understand what you said but I read it twice just to make sure. You might want to go back in and look at it.

Overall this story...is one of the best stories with originalality that I've read in a long time.

This is a great sotry pleae keep it up write lmore soon