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i didnt notice you addes 2 new chapters...... you know its funny cause i was thinking about this story a few days ago, and i was thinking that if i was writing this story i would add a cave scene where they're trapped cause of a storm... but i was thinking a thunder storm. i guess great minds really do think alike! this story is why i keep checking this site..... update soon please! -------p.s. had i known you posted the chater before this last one i would have reviewed... sorry for not noticing

Gotta say two things 1: thanks for emailing me and telling me this sight is back up because I sure had no idea 2: I love this story, I love it so much, I am happy to be reading it again. Chap 23 was good, got to see from her point of view and oh, the friction starting between Inuyasha and Hotaru great great.

Gawd-- you are going through a very busy time right now. I hope everything will slow down for you. Take care of yourself!

Another good chapter from you. I felt bad for Hotaru, and what she is facing. The her fears when she woke up naked.

-- Looks like her and Inuyasha are beginning to fall for each other. I cannot wait to see where you go with this.

~Tainted~

Ah, the joys of motherhood...lol. I have a seven year old, I can relate...

Okay I'm very much enjoying your story. And oh yes the madness, boy oh boy. Sure look forward until your next chapter.

Chanda

Thankyou for your review sweetpea ^_^… I followed your link her and kinda got stuck on your story. It’s really, really good! And I’m so happy that there’s a shitload of chapters still for me to read! Don’t you hate it when you start getting into a story and then bang… no more chapters and you’re waiting forever for an update?

Anyways… Chapter One… Kagome the mole… who would’ve guessed it hey? With Miroku to boot. Reowrr *scratching claws* Yup… can’t say I’m a huge fan of Kagome…

But THEN… Hotaru! She’s Kagome’s daughter!? Cool… So does Inuyasha get with Hotaru? God’s I hope so… Eat that Kagome you has been! *teehee* And Kagome is a pill freak! I love it! Then again I have kids too so I can understand her dilemma (can’t wait till the lil’ darlings are teenager *choking on tongue*) I loved the whole dropped another pill and continued to cook dinner. Man… that’s gonna be me in 12 years time *doh!* Anyway, I loved the angst of this chapter. Kagome regretting her actions and all. Very good sweetpea.

K… off to finish reading… Good stuff ~_^
The Sinner.

I am so sorry I am so late in reviewing. Things around here have been beyond crazy lately. Anyways--I loved the two newest chapters.

I was shocked by what was going on with Ken and what happened to him in the end. The flashbacks were wonderful and wonderfully written.

Lawd-- I sat there kinda stunned for a moment reading that, before I knew it the chapter was over with. I was like NO-- not yet!
Thank you for the updates!

~Tainted~

i love this story! i cant wait for the next chapter!

I just have to say "OH MY GOD!" This story is so kick ass, when I read the part about Hotaru (I hope I spelt it right) getting raped I was like woah, it was so real, but now we have his version and though it was still rape the pictures that went through my mind I can't breathe I can't wait to see what happens next! Hurry and update!

Hello remember me...lol Sorry its been a while since I last reviewed and for that I'm sorry. I had a couple of chapters to catch up with, still love your story. I look foward until your next review.

Chanda

Hello everyone, I want to thank all of you who've reviewed the story. I've noticed too that some of you that haven't reviewed in a while reviewed after the last chapter. I am happy with the response that I have received from the last chapter. Now as some of you may know I am in fact pregnant and about to have a scheduled c-section in five weeks, so for me to write something like that well....I have no excuse but that she can't have the baby. I have other plans for our Hotaru. Keep reading and it will all unfold for you. It was indeed a very hard chapter for me to write since I place myself in the charaters shoes. I actually cried, so, I thought it was good, but I wanted to see what you all thought and it worked.

As far as updating the story, according to the web sight I can't download anymore chapters until March first, so, until then keep thinking about what is going to happen next and than on March first come back and read to see if you were right.

Again thank you and sorry about not being able to update, but in a good way this allow more people to review the chapter neh?

luv LdyMoon