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for Betrayal's Gift

by LdyMoon

person Angel
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for giving me a call back when i emailed you. I was so disappointed when the site went down for a good sec. i've missed so much of this story. when i found it at mediaminor i was so happy and then to find out that there are more stories posted here and that it was back on. I was a little confused when I first went in this site, but I bookmarked what I wanted and now i am hot to trot!!! ok, so much to comment on so i'll say it in so many words I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! alright finally i get to see both Inu Yasha and Hotaru letting there walls down. Is Inu Yasha totally deluding himself? I love it. Anyway, I am so exicted to be reading this story again. These are oen of those that you can never let go unfinished. Update soon ok other wise I'm going to be like this again X__X n u dont want that now do u.

person The real Hotaru
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK I'm so way behind in my reading that it's not even funny. I'm only on 21.

Your story seems to have a life of it's own. Hotaru is a prisonor and if shippo trys to help her he will be killed. Inuyasha is so cold hearted that it's almost shocking. Drama, drama, drama I love it!!! Keep it up.
person cm44256
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey lady... love the story. I had alot of chapters to catch up on... but well worth the read. I look forward until your update.

Chanda
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack! What a cliffy!-- I loved the way Inuyasha let her explore his body. That was great! The of course his explorations of hers. That was quite hot!

Wonderful updates! This is a very good and intense story! --Thank you!

~Tainted~
person Ur fan
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that this is an excellent story. Please update soon I'm looking forward to it.
person Cathy
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that I haven't been reviewing. I promise I've been reading but, to lazy to review. Where do I start oh my god! I am so involved with your story, this story is the best so far that you've written. Like I said different from your other stuff but this is the best. I love your original characters they have such life. Please update soon.
person Sorceress
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story I can't wait for the next chapters, I am waiting to see if Iunyasha is in love with her and not lying to himself.
person Sorceress
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read the next chapter, to me it seems like Inuyasha is starting to like the girl and she him, she is going to be scared but she will come around. And I think that owl I forget her name kill that butterfly one Faye. I hate to say it but I don't like the owl and something needs to be done to her she is only trying to hurt the poor girl and she has been hurt.
person chubbers
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh poor inuyasha.... he was so close... who did deva kill? well, my first thought would be faye, cause she blurted her plans to hotaru.... but thats too obvious.... maybe some lower youkai and she's gonna blame it on hotaru? oooh i cant waaaaiiit! update soon kay?
person silent pluto
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa ho ho!
Now this stuff is getting juicy!!!!