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yyaaaaay! an update! im glad your still working on this stor i looooove it!

Hitomi is so cool she needs to be running the show!!! I'm an Hitomi/Inu fan all the way woot woot!!!

Shhh, I'm in class pretending to be doing my typing work. Anyway, I've been reading this story and it's fantastic it should be nominated. Why isn't anyone nomininating the story???? I guess I'll have to become a part of this group just to do that. I think it's well written and very visual. I loved certain parts in every chapter, from chapter one I felt Inu Yasha's hurt, anger and betrayal and in two I felt and remembered being teased in middle school and high school, so, I believe that you have your feelings down and everyone reading can feel along with the characters. May I use your story as a project of mine at school. I promise I'm not stealing it. How long will it be before your done cause I would really love to use it.

I'll send you my email and we could discuss it.

Oh, my a nasty cliffy. Love it. Look forward until your next update.
Chanda

Wow this just keep getting better and better I cant wait to read your next chapters

Your story keeps building up and I can't wait for the finale. Give me more. Hitomi was just hot. I think I like her too. If there is a way for Inuyasha to have both of them please consider this idea. I think that would be cool.

Wahooo--I am reviewer number 200! Congratulations!

Ohhs--I loved how they got her bad side out. Then onto some rough loving. --The back and forth between the two personalities was well done.

Great chapter. Hope to see more soon!

~Tainted~

I must say that Hitomi is quite a character. She is totally different from Hotaru with her boldness. And goodness you have them breaking mirrors, isn't tht bad luck at least for seven years? I liked how Hotaru's transformation caused Inuyasha to come out slightly as well. Good chapter can't wait for the next one.

I"m feeling like this right now =^__^= That was such a ooh, I just wish that were me in there with Inuyahsa pushing me up against the freakin walls. Gawd that was hot!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE.

Ok like for real that chapter was all good but now Hotaru might die since Inuyahsa knows whose behind it all. Can he really kill her? Maybe if he does and Sesshomaru uses his sword to bring her back she could be healed and then Inuyasha reallizes hwo much he loves her nd they get together. oh thsi is why I'm not the writer and you are that was so boring, well, hurry up and let em see what you have them doing so I wont have to come up wiht lame ideas. :) hurry hurry

That was so intense I had my boyfriend read it adn then we role played thanks a lot for the idea!!!!! I owe you big time!!!!!! update soon.