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Pwease up date this iz such a kool stry.

You have such a great imagination and a good sense of story telling. You capture your audience's mind and demand their attention so what I am saying is that you have my applaud.

I apologize I typed in my name all scrambled up. But, again great story.

Just read another chapter and it was just as good. I melted in my seat at the thought of Inuyasha swimming in the hot spring. OH SO SEXY!!! And hey, if I was Hotaru I'd be willing to for get about all the bad things that happen to me and be willing give myself to Inuyasha. Oh wait I'm Hotaru. And I don't mind begging *evil smile*

Ok I'm still playing catch up in my reading. It's really late and this is the last chapter I'm going to read tonight. To bad for me this chapter ended on a sad note. At first I was all like "I'm so happy Inuyasha's going to see her grandma" then you tell me she's dead. Kay, I kinda new that was coming but still. Now I have to go to bed sad. Oh well, I'll have to read some more another time. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!

I am so sorry to hear about your friend and her car. I hope that she is alright. I send her my prayers.

Now this chapter oh my word, it was lovely. I am so happy that they finally made love and that he made her his mate. I wonder if he'll regret it. And what does his Jeanie mean htat his second wish was fulfilled? You left so many questions unanswered. Like what does Kagome feel now? I can't wait to read your next chapter.

Wonderful work as usual. Please keep it up.

This story ROCKS U got that!!!! I'm like this @ @ right now. Really I am.
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Plz update soon.

oh, and I know exactly what it feels like to be the bologna in that sandwhich. My car was gone, nothing but scrap when it was all done. I had to pat myself down when I got out just to make sure that I was still in my body.

Wonderful, just wonderful. I've been reading but always forget to update because I'm still thinking about your story, seriously. I guess this is the point where the plot thickens. Is Inuyasha only using Hotaru or will he really learn to love again. And Hotaru is so brave to try and love once more and with a man who is secretely using her.
I feel for everyone in this story. Are Miroku and Kagome going to pull through and realize that they are stuck with each other now? What else is going to happen? I'm so excited. You manage to take everyone on this roller coaster ride and the magic starts to happen we become the herione and feel everything that she feels and when the story is put away we are still left thinking about it and playing the role in our heads. That's real talent.

Hey I absolutley love your story its the best one i've read so far. You could be a rreal writer some day well catch ya on the flip side

Your so evil in so many ways. But I'm so hooked I don't think I can go on without knowing what happens next. Great chapter! I kind of felt bad for ken, but at the same time I don't. I just don't know how I feel. I kind of think that's what you were going for. If it was then it worked!