rate_review Reviews

The battle scene was writen really good. I was totally into it. I like the way Inuyasha handaled Shippo's situation. However I'm not crazy about the Hitumi chick (or what ever her name is). She must go!!! You know as in DIE!!!

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Loving it. Loving it. I need more. I'm happy there is more for me to read. Great chapter!

Ld, you had me in tears...I can't help but feel bad for Kagome. I know she was wrong for cheating on him, but still.

You wrote Kagome's emotions out so well. I tell you what if that was my daughter...with my ex...oh boy, and I saw them do that. Sorry I'm in shock...LMAO!

I wonder how her daughter is going to find out in the journal, and how's she's going to react.


Loved it can't wait until your next chapter.

Chanda

its sbout time you updated! just kidding ;) too bad i wont be at home the next time you update :(.......if its not too much trouble would you ba able to email when when you finish the story? im going away till oct.24th and im afraid i wont be able to find the story by then. my email is kristin_sinha@yahoo.com thanks so much if you can keep me updated.

OMG! What does this mean??? I can't wait to see what is written in the journals I am so excited rite now I don't know how to handle myself. I waited two whole weeks, two whole weeks and now I'm going to have to wait another one. This is such a good story. I swear. Kags is so distraught she had that dream for a reason and ooohs again my poor Miroku was just cut down to the quick! I need to go soothe him he needs my love now. And Inuyasha is so mean, he enjoyed it he really did, but I understand why he did. Keep up the good work ldymoonluvsinuyasha. Plz don't make me wait so long next time. =^__^=


Carmen

Kuul storie -__- plz update and I want to see more Hitommi and InuYasha. Are you going to make a sex scene with them two in it. Plz do. They rock. Hotaru is a nice girl but she is to nice Inu needs a badass chick like Hitomi.

Kagome just needs to get over it let Inuyasha and her daughter be happy because it is looking that way I hope that all goes well for them all.

First off I'd like to say that I was checking this site all week long since you didn't post last week I was like AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGGGG but now that I finally saw the update I'm no longer a green beasty.
Now for Kags damn she got it up the ass that was something and I feel for poor Miroku she just keeps hurting him. And I'm like so wanting to know what is in the journals, hurry and tell me ok. Plz update soon!!!! ^__^

I have really enjoyed this story, I hope to read more soon.
Thanks for writing it!
Sunshyne

This is outstanding. I've never met an original character that I thought about rooting for. I usually like to read just the characters, but, you threw in this Hotaru person and made her part of the story. I was totally kicked in the head from the beginning. Really I was blown away. This story is in so many words stupendo, magnifico, etc etc etc. I await your update eagerly. It gives me something to do when my teacher is just constantly listening to her own voice.