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for Betrayal's Gift

by LdyMoon

person chnanda
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and the drama continues..lol..but that's what's so good with this story. All the little twists and turns. Yes, I live up north and yesterday it unfortunately snowed. Yuck!!!

Well look, forward to you're next update.

Chanda
person trista
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this story is very interesting I'm only on chapter 11 so I can't wait to see what happens. I'll prolly get on later on and read again.
person Cathy
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've caught up on this story and I can't even begin to start. This is a great story I tell ya. So many twist and turns. Oh my word is she going to die? I don't know and I love it.

person Angel
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Pulls at hair* OOHHHH MYYYYY GAWDDDDD! SORI 4 THE KIDS REALLY BUT UPDATE SOON!!!!!
person Sonyasha
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, great chapter. i like the new obsticle that you put in. i can't wait to read more. please update this soon. that is when your kids have calmed down ^^

Ja-Ne =^_^=
person The real Hotaru
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I know this has to have a happy ending so I'm not going to start freaking out just yet. But I'm warning you if he changes his mind and she goes mad and dies and I don't get my happy ending; I'm going to hunt you down and make you rewrite it. So you better do it right the first time :) Other then that this chappy was great. More please!
person Miroku's Dream
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHHHH you just keep adding more twist is he going to change his mind and than regret it. Than he can use his third wish and she'll be fine becz he could wish her mind healthy without the Hitomi person in it.

Just speculating keep up the good work thanks for the update.

Carmen
person Hitomi cheerleader
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah let her die and bring out Hitomi!!!!
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz update good s tory
person chanda
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update. Sesshomaru gave him an earful...rightfully so...lol. Hope to see your update soon. Good luck with your kids.

Chanda