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I just finished reading this and I really enjoyed the story but I can't tell if it's complete of not. It doesn't seem complete because the last chapter didn't feel like an ending but it could've been. I wish there was more.

This was very good, I only wish it was longer. I wanted to see what happens to Kikyo(I hate her). I was thinking that if Rose can see everyones past, present and future...then she'd not only know how good,kind & loving Kagome had been to him & all that Kagome had given to him & done for him (including all the pain Kagome suffered by having her soul torn from her,the pain she suffered & fought to survive that,how Inu didn't care that Kikyo taken part of her soul or that Kikyo stole the souls of undead innocent beings to feed on & how he didn't believe Kikyo tried to kill her), she'd also know and have seen what Inu did and said to Kikyo and why he'd done it (She'd know Inu was a necrophiliac and she'd know exactly what he & Kikyo said,did & were planning to do to Kagome...how long they'd been using her, hurting her intentionally and laughing at the thought of her suffering) & Inu IS MATED for life to an undead being,willingly. Rose has been made out to be good & really care for Kagome & with all Rose has to have seen of Inu,wouldn't she see that he has no honor & only feels bad for being caught(& probably because he was caught before he got all he wanted) & would she ever WANT to be romantically or sexually involved with a male that has sex & is mated to a living corpse?? I wonder what Kagome & Sessh's pups would look like. I can just picture them being born as pups with (tiny) wings that grow up to be giant Inu's (similar Sessh in his true form) except with huge wings and instead of them being all white(like Sessh)their colorings, depending on how many they have, are different mixtures of black & white(except,if they have any twins or triplets then they'd be be identical).I wonder if their humanoid appearances would include wings or if only some of them would have them?? I was also wondering,since she has an 'inner youkai/demon/beast',does that mean Kagome has another form(Like,Sessh's giant Inu)?

Awww! That was so sweet... and just in time to (had a time limit on the computer for the night due to bad report card) Tomorrow I'm going to look you up and see if you wrote any more.. you have a natural talent and I can't wait to see more of it. Until then, Ja ne ^^

Just an idea, but you should make another chapter after this telling about their life together, maybe with some chrildren or something like that. Just an idea. Nice story BTW.

Dawna Sama

I didnt want t review till i read the whole story and every chapter is phenomenal!! You had such a way with words! The way the characters expressed their love and anger was great! i couldnt have chosen better words...heh..I really loved it when Kagome finally told him off! lol Inuyahsa deserved it! *Pulls out confetti poppers and lets them explode everywhere* The finally thing you need to do is get Rose and Inu together so he will stop sulking. lol I wonder how 'clay-pot' is going to take all of this! AnYwAyS...Good job!! =^_^=

there newely mated how sweet your really good at wrightin
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh ym god i loved it that was totally awesome.

This IS one hell of a story! I really enjoyed it. I can't wait for when you can create a sequal to this fic.

Until than, good luck with all the little twists and turns Life has sent your way. Just remember, these "tasks" wouldn't have been sent to you if you couldn't handle them.

Until we meet again, ja ne!

Phoenix

Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to read how they get rid of Kikyou and bring Rose and Inuyasha together. Also what Naraku thinks about the new Kagome.

Ok what happens next. I need the next chapter please please please keep writing!!!!