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Yay! Sota is introduced! Dang, it's hard for me to picture him like that (physical traits). Good job and thanx for updating so soon. Can you do it again? So, Sango's mum died in that fire. Good ridance! -Thanx

Please update soon. If you don't then something bad will happen. It's great and I STILL love it! Keep it up! I'm rooting for you! -Thanx ^_^

i wanna cry, it was so good must update soon!

I still love it! Thanks for updateing so soon. Please do it again. I can't wait till next chapter! ^_^

I love your fic. It's very orginal. I like orginal ^_^. Please update soon. I cried when Sango got killed *tear*. Once again please update soon. -Thanx

very sad but i love it, please continue

I have been reading and very much enjoying. I like the theme and plot and how you are going about it, but if I may, I would suggest digging in more into the characters. I feel like there is so much you can do with this fic to make it amazing, dont get me wrong its great as it is but it needs a little more substance. You could try making your chapters longer and be a little more detailed, you know, the setting of the story. Remembe in English class when they talked about writting that you have to answer: when, where, who, what, how, well just like that but adding the setting, the atmosphere, theme and time. Im sure you can do it. But please, dont stop and please dont take this as a flame, Im also an author on this site and I assure you that the least that I want is to offend a fellow author, especially one of the few who's caught my interest.

please continue with story. I really liked it. It is a smae you had to get kill of sango. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!

You know, I really love reading your stories. They are very different and This is another one I love. Keep up the good work!

OMG you better update ASAP, or sesshomaru will attack you..... wait..... that's not really a bad thing, is it? ok, let me reword it.

YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON OR SESSHOMARU WILL IGNORE YOU!!

that's better ^^