rate_review Reviews

Oh my God that is sooo goood. Is there more?

If you could see me right now you'd see a HUGE smile on my face. I'm so glad that Sesshomaru proposed to Kagome, it was so sweet! And I'm glad that Kagome gave in and didn't push him away. I can't wait to read more!!

The love making was written well, however, I thought it was gross the oral sex especially because Kagome had to be nasty, dirty and stinky from not having a bath...hehehe...poor Sess, his mouth may forever be damaged BWAHAHAHAHAHA!

I really liked this chapter, can't wait to read more!! ^_~

That was such a good chapter! I'm so glad that they know what kept Sesshomaru away for so long. It's all falling into place now. I can't wait to read more!! ^_^

YAY! Sesshomaru is back in action! :D:D:D:D This was an AWESOME chapter!!! ^^ please update soon!

That is good no not good but grate what is next?

must he be so...naive? Souta is Kag's bro...doesn't he know that? when's there gonna be any fluff btwn Sesshomaru and Kagome?

please update i love this story

I apologize for my next statement, but Im having a little trouble with the fact that your chapters are getting shorter. I dont mean this as a flame, but really; do you expect me to accept such a short chapter. I understand writters block because right now Im suffering from it but thats why you have to know where your story is going. try the main 5 questions to see if it helps (where?, when?, why?, who?, and how?) also try to put more of yourself as a writter (personality, aspirations, dreams, goals, you know things that make you want to become better) dont rush the chapters just for an update and to keep fans happy, they'll be even more happy if you put more into it. Im sure you can do it. I trust your talent seeing as you came up with one of the most original fics I've read. Pls dont take offense to this review because I dont say it as an insult but as a fan who acknowledges your talent and wishes for you to be better.