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Wow! Awesome story. XD It would have to be for me to actually review... which I almost never do. lol You did a great job. Hope you keep up the good work.

I loved this story. I cried through some of it and was really relieved how it ended. I am not really one for AU's but this story was great.

Thank you so much for writing it and hope to read more from you soon.

ShadowandFlamePanther

I was really sad to see Sango die so early in the fic, I expected her to end up with Miroku. But all in all perfect score. Great writing.

to STINKUGLY:
lol.actually,i DO know what's going on...sesshy told me herself.we are actually good friends, sometimes collaborate, and also beta each other's fics on occasion. BTW, if you want to argue it out, go here....
http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/story.php?no=544207293
'full frontal alchemist' is one of the fics we've worked on together.

Hi, I'm Christianne and I loved your story "Journey" but there was one little thing that I didn't like or better said incorrect. Drugs are not legal in Amsterdam only tolerated to a certain degree. Only softdrugs are tolerated like mariuana, but harddrugs like cocaine and heroine are forbidden. You cannot get an overdose on mariuana and is only very mildly addictive, and that is why it is tolerated. I am NOT saying that you should use Mariuana because drug no mather how mild are stupid and it can cause minor braindamage if used to often. I'm from Holland (as you probably guessed) but the only thing I have ever taken is asprin. Unfortunatly a lot of people believe that dutch people are drug addicts and that is definatly NOT true ( I know you didn't say that in the story). Everybody has had a lot of information about the dangers of drugs so anyone who has been addicted knew what they were getting themselves into. Most people are to smart and don't ever start. I hope I have informed enough about drug use in Holland and if you have any questions just ask. There is only one more thing to say, and that is keep up the good work, I really like youre writing style and I love a good Sesshoumaru and Kagome Pairing. I'm also gratefull that you warned about the rape part. Its not easy for me to read about these things and I can been in a depression for days if I get caught off gard so thank you!!!!!!!!!! Hope to see more of youre work soon.


love Christianne

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mamakei

xdrty

Yhaoo, you go girl..........elriconeechan. What the fuck have you got to be squealing about. I gave her some very constructive information and she..........a least is mature enough to know it. After I showed her what I was talking about, she hasn't written me back and it's been 3 days now. I think she is considering what I had to say. But I will say that had I known this was a public notice board, I would have come off a lot differently. But as for you, you don't know shit about what has gone on here and as far as I am conserned, YOU can stick your YAHOO up your YZOO.

STINKUGLY

hah!you go girl..kick his/her/it's ass!!

This is a response to STINKUGLY. First, I do not appreciate the content of your review. This is a fanfiction, and my story, and if you don't like it, NO ONE IS MAKING YOU READ IT! Lots of other people on several different sites enjoyed it and have told me as much. If you have any suggestions as to how to make it better, feel free to let me know, but just coming on here and saying that is sucks is not only rude and inconsiderate...it makes you look like a total jerk. Don't get me wrong, I do appreciate constructive criticism, but what you wrote was not constructive in any sense of the word.

Second, a word of advice....when you post a review like yours on a public domain where other people can read it, YOU MIGHT WANT TO DOUBLE CHECK YOUR SPELLING. You misspelled AIN'T, and couldn't even spell your own name the same way at the beginning and the end of your review. So in the end, you not only came off looking like a jerk, you also made yourself look somewhat foolish.

This was the very first fanfiction that I ever wrote, and for a newbie, I don't think it was too bad. I understand that there are bound to be flaws. Even the most experienced writers mess up every now and then. I am also certain that there are people out there who are not going to like what I wrote. That is their perrogative. No one is forced to read this.

Finally...this is fanfiction, and it is my story. I wrote it the way that I wanted it. The whole point of a story is to tell it...that's what authors do - they tell a story...if you want to be shown a story - go to a theatre or turn on the television - that's what movies are for...they show you a story.

arigato,

sesshys_jaded_samuri